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Life me kabhi kabhi kuch ise mod aate hai jo apki zindagi to 180 par ghuma dete hai aur jo hamne socha nahi hota wo manjar dikh jata hai...par yehi to zindagi hai. Hai na?...to chaliye aapko aisa hi ek zindagi ka kisa sunata hu...umeed hai aapko pasand aayega.
Ye Kahani Raj ke POV se hogi...to chaliye Shuru Karte Hai
Hello dosto mera naam Raj hai mene abhi 12th class complete ki hai aur 2 din pehle mera 18th b'day gya hai...me originally mumbai se belong karta hu...mere parents kafi ameer hai aur sath hi self-centered bhi...wo hote hai na jinko sirf society me izzat kamane se fursat nahi hoti...jinko har rishte se pyara apni naak aur izzat hoti hai...bas aise hi log hai mere mummy-papa.
Kehne ko to mera ghar kafi bda hai aur har cheez hi sahuliyat hai isme...nokar-chakar hai...gadiya hai...wo har cheez mojood hai jo ameero ke ghar me hoti hai...pa na jane kyu itna sab kuch hote hue bhi me akela mehsus karta hu...kyuki mehengi cheezo se aaram mil sakta hai par ye jaruri nahi ki wo aapko sukh de ske...is akelepan ka mukhye karan ye bhi hai ki me ek introvert type ka ladka hu jada logo se bat cheet karna mujhe na hi to pasand hai aur na hi me kar pata hu bas apni duniya me lga hota hu...par me introvert hu psycho nhi kabhi-kabhi mujhe bhi bat karne ka man hota hai jaise aam logo ko hota hai par mushkil ye hai ki mere pas bat karne ke liye koi nahi hai...halaki mummy-papa mere sath hi rehte hai par unko fursat hi nahi mere liye...
Papa to jadatar bahar hote hai business ke liye jab kabhi ghar par aate to sirf meri padhai kaise chal rahi hai...ache marks lane hai taki unki izzat socity me aur bad sake...bas isi tarah ki baat hoti hai hamare beech...unhe is baat se koi matlab nahi hai ki me kaisa feel kar rha hu...wahi dusri aur mummy ghar par mere sath hote hue bhi mujhe kafi dur hoti hai...matlab ki unhe bhi society me apni value badhane ki fikar rehti hai...isliye din bhar ghar se dur rehti hai kabhi kisi kitty party me to kabhi kisi social function me...aur jab ghar wapas aati hai to itna thak jati hai ki sirf unhe bister dikhai deta hai...kai bar to mujhe mummy ko dekhe kai din beet jate hai...un dono ke is tarah ke rawaye ke chalte me hasna bhi bhul gya hu...
Par me hamesha aisa nahi tha ek time tha jab me kafi khush rha karta tha... koi tha jise me apne dil me uth rhe vicharo ko keh saktha tha...koi tha jo meri betuki bato ko bhi aisa sunta tha jaise me koi divye gyan de rha hu... jiske pas mere liye time hi time tha...jiske hote hue me kabhi akela mehsus nahi karta tha... wo insan koi aur nahi meri badi behen Aanchal thi...kehne ko to Aanchal mujhe 4 saal badi thi par hum dono ek dusre ke sath friend ke jaise rehte the... mene kabhi usko didi nahi kha aur usne bhi mujhe is cheez ke liye nahi toka... jab kabhi me kisi problem me hota tha to me sabse pehle Aanchal ke pas aata tha... jab kabhi mujhe kisi cheez me advice chahiye hoti to wo ek jimedar badi bahen ki tarah mujhe samjhati...aur agar kabhi hum dono moj-masti karte to wo bilkul choti bachi ban jati. Kyuki papa-mummy ko ko to fursat nahi hoti thi...to mera jadatar samay meri Aanchal ke sath hi beet-ta tha...wohi meri mummy thi, wohi papa aur wohi dost...meri life mast chal rahi thi kisi dukh se dur-dur tak wasta nahi tha...din khusi-khusi beet rahe the...aur phir aaya wo manhus din jisne sab kuch badal diya...mere haste-khelte sansar ko ujad diya...mujhe aaj bhi yad hai Friday ka din tha...shaam ke koi 6:30 baje the ki neeche hal se kafi jor se chilane ki awaj aa rahi thi jaise koi lad rha ho...mene neeche jakar dekha to Papa aur Aanchal me kisi cheez ko lekar ladai ho rahi thi.
PAPA:
Kabardar aajke bad us ladke se mili bhi to...teri tange kat dunga...mere ghar me rehna hai to mere tarike he rehna hoga nahi to nikal ga yha se
AANCHAL:
Me us ladke ko to chod nahi sakti papa kyuki me use bhoot pyar karti hu...aur agar bat ye hai ki us ladke me aur is ghar me mujhe chun na pde to me use chunugi...isliye me abhi is ghar ko chod ke ja rahi hu
PAPA:
Ha to ja abhi ke abhi...mujhe aise beti nahi chahiye jo samaj me meri naak kta de...tu mar gayi hai aaj se mere liye
Itna bolkar papa ghar se bhar nikal gaye guse me...aur Aanchal bhagte hue uper apne kamre me chali gayi...aur me but bna ye sab dekta rha...
jab mujhe thoda hosh aaya to me pas me khadi mummy ke pas gya
ME:
Mummy ye sab kya ho rha hai...aur papa ne Aanchal ko ghar se nikalne ko kyu bola...mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa rha
MUMMY:
Teri behen ek choti hasti ke ladke ke sath ishq lda rahi hai... aur use shadi karne ki bat kar rahi hai...jo hame manjur nahi
ME:
Par mummy ek bar aap us ladke se mil to lo ho sakta hai ladka acha ho aur aap logo ko pasand aa jaye
MUMMY:
Ladka chahe acha ho ya bura par hai to aukat me ha se chota...lof kya bolenge ki Singhania's ki ladki ne ek mamuli se ladke ke saath shadi kar li...ye hame harjiz manjoor nahi
ME:
Par mummy wo..wo
MUMMY:
Bas ab mujhe kuch aur nahi sunna
Itna bolkar mummy apne room me chali gayi aur me unhe dekhta rhe gya...par tabhi mujhe Aanchal ka kyal aaya...aur me dodta hua uske room me poncha...wo apna saman pack kar chuki thi...ye dekhte hi mera jism thanda pad gya aur me dod kar use kas ke pakad liya...jaise agar chooda to wo chali jayegi...aur rone lga
ME(ROTE HUE):
Nahi Aanchu me tujhe nahi jane dunga... me papa se bat karunga mujhe yakin he wo man jayenge...par plz tu kahi mat ja
(Me Aanchal to pyar se Aanchu kehta hu)
Aanchal me mujhe apne se lag kiya aur mujhe apni chati se lga liya jaise bacho lo lgate hai... aur bda pyar se mere sar par hath phirane lgi
AANCHAL:
Chup hoga mere shona babu...tu ro mat nahi to me bhi ro dungi...plz chup hoja
Kafi der ke bad me chup ho gya...par aansu abhi bhi ruk nahi rhe the...kher jaise these mene unpar kabu kiya
AANCHAL:
Dekh tujhe bhi pta hai aur mujhe bhi ki hamare parents to apni izzat kitni pyari hai... wo kabhi bhi mujhe Rajeev se shadi karne nahi denge...isliye yehi behter rahega ki me is ghar ko chood du
Uski ye bat sunkar ek bar phir mere aansu behne lge
ME:
Par ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki mere samjhane se papa-mummy man jaye
AANCHAL:
Tujhe sahi me aisa lagta hai
(meri aankho me dekhkar usne pucha)
Aur mera sar bebasi me jhuk gya kyuki pta to mujhe bhi tha ki papa kabhi nahi manege...
ek bar to mne socha aanchal ko samjhata hu shayad ye man jaye par mujhe pta tha ki wo Rajeev se kitna pyar karti thi...usne mujhe bataya tha ek bar... par mujme aisa karne ki himat nahi hui kyoki me Anchu ka dil nahi tod sakta tha chahe mujhe ise kitni bhi takleef ho... jab meri aur se koi jawab nahi aaya to Aanchal bol padi
AANCHAL:
Nahi hai na iska jawab tere paas... chal ab chup hoga aur mujhe khusi-khusi bidai de...jaise tu kehta tha ki meri shadi par has kar mujhe bidai kareyga...hihihi
Aanchu ye bat sunkar ek bar ko to mere chera par bhi muskurahat aa gayi thi...par phir Aanchu ke ghar chood kar jane ki bat yad aate hi me phir gambhir ho gya
ME:
Acha agr tune jane ka man bna hi liya hai to me bhi tere saath chulga...ruk me apna bag karta hu
Abhi me aage bdha hi tha ki Aanchu ne mera hath pakad liya
AANCHAL:
Nahi tu mere saath nahi ja sakta Shona...na jane hum dono ko kis halat se gujarna pde... au me nahi chati ki tujhe kuch takleef ho...isliye tu mere saath jane ki zid nahi karega...tujhe meri kasam
Bas phir kya tha jab Aanchu ne kasam de di to mera uske saath jaane ka matlab hi nahi tha...me bas apni bebasi par rota rha...Aanchu ne meri sar ko pakad kar mere mathe ko chuma
AANCHAL:
Ek bar meri grasti set ho gaye to me tujhe bhi apne pas bula lungi... phir hum dono mje se sath me rahenge... chal ab has de kya aisi roni surat leka wida karenga mujhe
(aur me pet kar gud-gudi karne lgi)
Jise me has diya...jab Aanchal ke saath koi bat nahi bani to mene Papa ko samjhane ka faisla kiya... ho sakta tha wo man jaye...ma bhagkar papa ke paas gya... aur wo shayad bohot arse ke baad pehle moka tha jab me papa se kuch mang rha tha...mene papa se baar-baar request ki wo Aanchal ko rok le...par wo apne faisle pe atal the... phir me bhagkar mummy ke paas gya par unhone bhi meri sunwai nahi ki... me paglo ki tarah idhar se udhar bhag rha tha ki koi to meri Aanchu ko rok le jane se par sab prayas vifal rahe...itna me Aanchu me saman lekar main gate par aa gayi...
Aur mere mathe ko chum kar mujhe apna khayal rakhne ko kha...aur sath hi kha ki wo mujhe roj phone karegi...aur gate se bahar nikal gayi...me bas aansu aankho me liye apne haste-khelte sansar ko jate dekhta rha...
Us din ke bad mano mere me kuch Zindagi niras hi ho gyi...jis ghar me mujhe khusiya hi milti thi wo ghar aaj katne ko dod rha tha...karib 5 din bad Aanchal ka phone aaya... usne mujhe bataya ki wo Rajeev ke saath hai aur 3 din bad wo log shadi karne wale hai...jise sunkar me bohot khus huwa...aur dil me umeed jagi ki mere wo khushal din phir lot kar aa sakte hai.
Par mujhe kya pta tha ki wo last bar tha jab me Aanchu ki awaj sun rha tha...kyuki uske bad kabhi bhi Aanchu ka phone nahi aaya... mummy-papa ko to is baat se shayad fark hi nahi pad rha tha ki unki beti ghar chod kar chali gayi...wo log pehle ki tarah apni life me mast the jaise Aanchal kabhi unke sath thi hi nahi...is baat ko aaj 3 saal beet gaye hai...aaj bhi mujhe uski utni hi yaad aati hai... me ye sab baate Aanchu aur mera photo hath me lekar soch rha tha apni desk par betha aur khidki se bahar jhak rha tha...aur ye samajne ki Koshis kar rha tha aakhir isme kiska dosh hai.
Life me kabhi kabhi kuch ise mod aate hai jo apki zindagi to 180 par ghuma dete hai aur jo hamne socha nahi hota wo manjar dikh jata hai...par yehi to zindagi hai. Hai na?...to chaliye aapko aisa hi ek zindagi ka kisa sunata hu...umeed hai aapko pasand aayega.
Ye Kahani Raj ke POV se hogi...to chaliye Shuru Karte Hai
Hello dosto mera naam Raj hai mene abhi 12th class complete ki hai aur 2 din pehle mera 18th b'day gya hai...me originally mumbai se belong karta hu...mere parents kafi ameer hai aur sath hi self-centered bhi...wo hote hai na jinko sirf society me izzat kamane se fursat nahi hoti...jinko har rishte se pyara apni naak aur izzat hoti hai...bas aise hi log hai mere mummy-papa.
Kehne ko to mera ghar kafi bda hai aur har cheez hi sahuliyat hai isme...nokar-chakar hai...gadiya hai...wo har cheez mojood hai jo ameero ke ghar me hoti hai...pa na jane kyu itna sab kuch hote hue bhi me akela mehsus karta hu...kyuki mehengi cheezo se aaram mil sakta hai par ye jaruri nahi ki wo aapko sukh de ske...is akelepan ka mukhye karan ye bhi hai ki me ek introvert type ka ladka hu jada logo se bat cheet karna mujhe na hi to pasand hai aur na hi me kar pata hu bas apni duniya me lga hota hu...par me introvert hu psycho nhi kabhi-kabhi mujhe bhi bat karne ka man hota hai jaise aam logo ko hota hai par mushkil ye hai ki mere pas bat karne ke liye koi nahi hai...halaki mummy-papa mere sath hi rehte hai par unko fursat hi nahi mere liye...
Papa to jadatar bahar hote hai business ke liye jab kabhi ghar par aate to sirf meri padhai kaise chal rahi hai...ache marks lane hai taki unki izzat socity me aur bad sake...bas isi tarah ki baat hoti hai hamare beech...unhe is baat se koi matlab nahi hai ki me kaisa feel kar rha hu...wahi dusri aur mummy ghar par mere sath hote hue bhi mujhe kafi dur hoti hai...matlab ki unhe bhi society me apni value badhane ki fikar rehti hai...isliye din bhar ghar se dur rehti hai kabhi kisi kitty party me to kabhi kisi social function me...aur jab ghar wapas aati hai to itna thak jati hai ki sirf unhe bister dikhai deta hai...kai bar to mujhe mummy ko dekhe kai din beet jate hai...un dono ke is tarah ke rawaye ke chalte me hasna bhi bhul gya hu...
Par me hamesha aisa nahi tha ek time tha jab me kafi khush rha karta tha... koi tha jise me apne dil me uth rhe vicharo ko keh saktha tha...koi tha jo meri betuki bato ko bhi aisa sunta tha jaise me koi divye gyan de rha hu... jiske pas mere liye time hi time tha...jiske hote hue me kabhi akela mehsus nahi karta tha... wo insan koi aur nahi meri badi behen Aanchal thi...kehne ko to Aanchal mujhe 4 saal badi thi par hum dono ek dusre ke sath friend ke jaise rehte the... mene kabhi usko didi nahi kha aur usne bhi mujhe is cheez ke liye nahi toka... jab kabhi me kisi problem me hota tha to me sabse pehle Aanchal ke pas aata tha... jab kabhi mujhe kisi cheez me advice chahiye hoti to wo ek jimedar badi bahen ki tarah mujhe samjhati...aur agar kabhi hum dono moj-masti karte to wo bilkul choti bachi ban jati. Kyuki papa-mummy ko ko to fursat nahi hoti thi...to mera jadatar samay meri Aanchal ke sath hi beet-ta tha...wohi meri mummy thi, wohi papa aur wohi dost...meri life mast chal rahi thi kisi dukh se dur-dur tak wasta nahi tha...din khusi-khusi beet rahe the...aur phir aaya wo manhus din jisne sab kuch badal diya...mere haste-khelte sansar ko ujad diya...mujhe aaj bhi yad hai Friday ka din tha...shaam ke koi 6:30 baje the ki neeche hal se kafi jor se chilane ki awaj aa rahi thi jaise koi lad rha ho...mene neeche jakar dekha to Papa aur Aanchal me kisi cheez ko lekar ladai ho rahi thi.
PAPA:
Kabardar aajke bad us ladke se mili bhi to...teri tange kat dunga...mere ghar me rehna hai to mere tarike he rehna hoga nahi to nikal ga yha se
AANCHAL:
Me us ladke ko to chod nahi sakti papa kyuki me use bhoot pyar karti hu...aur agar bat ye hai ki us ladke me aur is ghar me mujhe chun na pde to me use chunugi...isliye me abhi is ghar ko chod ke ja rahi hu
PAPA:
Ha to ja abhi ke abhi...mujhe aise beti nahi chahiye jo samaj me meri naak kta de...tu mar gayi hai aaj se mere liye
Itna bolkar papa ghar se bhar nikal gaye guse me...aur Aanchal bhagte hue uper apne kamre me chali gayi...aur me but bna ye sab dekta rha...
jab mujhe thoda hosh aaya to me pas me khadi mummy ke pas gya
ME:
Mummy ye sab kya ho rha hai...aur papa ne Aanchal ko ghar se nikalne ko kyu bola...mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa rha
MUMMY:
Teri behen ek choti hasti ke ladke ke sath ishq lda rahi hai... aur use shadi karne ki bat kar rahi hai...jo hame manjur nahi
ME:
Par mummy ek bar aap us ladke se mil to lo ho sakta hai ladka acha ho aur aap logo ko pasand aa jaye
MUMMY:
Ladka chahe acha ho ya bura par hai to aukat me ha se chota...lof kya bolenge ki Singhania's ki ladki ne ek mamuli se ladke ke saath shadi kar li...ye hame harjiz manjoor nahi
ME:
Par mummy wo..wo
MUMMY:
Bas ab mujhe kuch aur nahi sunna
Itna bolkar mummy apne room me chali gayi aur me unhe dekhta rhe gya...par tabhi mujhe Aanchal ka kyal aaya...aur me dodta hua uske room me poncha...wo apna saman pack kar chuki thi...ye dekhte hi mera jism thanda pad gya aur me dod kar use kas ke pakad liya...jaise agar chooda to wo chali jayegi...aur rone lga
ME(ROTE HUE):
Nahi Aanchu me tujhe nahi jane dunga... me papa se bat karunga mujhe yakin he wo man jayenge...par plz tu kahi mat ja
(Me Aanchal to pyar se Aanchu kehta hu)
Aanchal me mujhe apne se lag kiya aur mujhe apni chati se lga liya jaise bacho lo lgate hai... aur bda pyar se mere sar par hath phirane lgi
AANCHAL:
Chup hoga mere shona babu...tu ro mat nahi to me bhi ro dungi...plz chup hoja
Kafi der ke bad me chup ho gya...par aansu abhi bhi ruk nahi rhe the...kher jaise these mene unpar kabu kiya
AANCHAL:
Dekh tujhe bhi pta hai aur mujhe bhi ki hamare parents to apni izzat kitni pyari hai... wo kabhi bhi mujhe Rajeev se shadi karne nahi denge...isliye yehi behter rahega ki me is ghar ko chood du
Uski ye bat sunkar ek bar phir mere aansu behne lge
ME:
Par ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki mere samjhane se papa-mummy man jaye
AANCHAL:
Tujhe sahi me aisa lagta hai
(meri aankho me dekhkar usne pucha)
Aur mera sar bebasi me jhuk gya kyuki pta to mujhe bhi tha ki papa kabhi nahi manege...
ek bar to mne socha aanchal ko samjhata hu shayad ye man jaye par mujhe pta tha ki wo Rajeev se kitna pyar karti thi...usne mujhe bataya tha ek bar... par mujme aisa karne ki himat nahi hui kyoki me Anchu ka dil nahi tod sakta tha chahe mujhe ise kitni bhi takleef ho... jab meri aur se koi jawab nahi aaya to Aanchal bol padi
AANCHAL:
Nahi hai na iska jawab tere paas... chal ab chup hoga aur mujhe khusi-khusi bidai de...jaise tu kehta tha ki meri shadi par has kar mujhe bidai kareyga...hihihi
Aanchu ye bat sunkar ek bar ko to mere chera par bhi muskurahat aa gayi thi...par phir Aanchu ke ghar chood kar jane ki bat yad aate hi me phir gambhir ho gya
ME:
Acha agr tune jane ka man bna hi liya hai to me bhi tere saath chulga...ruk me apna bag karta hu
Abhi me aage bdha hi tha ki Aanchu ne mera hath pakad liya
AANCHAL:
Nahi tu mere saath nahi ja sakta Shona...na jane hum dono ko kis halat se gujarna pde... au me nahi chati ki tujhe kuch takleef ho...isliye tu mere saath jane ki zid nahi karega...tujhe meri kasam
Bas phir kya tha jab Aanchu ne kasam de di to mera uske saath jaane ka matlab hi nahi tha...me bas apni bebasi par rota rha...Aanchu ne meri sar ko pakad kar mere mathe ko chuma
AANCHAL:
Ek bar meri grasti set ho gaye to me tujhe bhi apne pas bula lungi... phir hum dono mje se sath me rahenge... chal ab has de kya aisi roni surat leka wida karenga mujhe
(aur me pet kar gud-gudi karne lgi)
Jise me has diya...jab Aanchal ke saath koi bat nahi bani to mene Papa ko samjhane ka faisla kiya... ho sakta tha wo man jaye...ma bhagkar papa ke paas gya... aur wo shayad bohot arse ke baad pehle moka tha jab me papa se kuch mang rha tha...mene papa se baar-baar request ki wo Aanchal ko rok le...par wo apne faisle pe atal the... phir me bhagkar mummy ke paas gya par unhone bhi meri sunwai nahi ki... me paglo ki tarah idhar se udhar bhag rha tha ki koi to meri Aanchu ko rok le jane se par sab prayas vifal rahe...itna me Aanchu me saman lekar main gate par aa gayi...
Aur mere mathe ko chum kar mujhe apna khayal rakhne ko kha...aur sath hi kha ki wo mujhe roj phone karegi...aur gate se bahar nikal gayi...me bas aansu aankho me liye apne haste-khelte sansar ko jate dekhta rha...
Us din ke bad mano mere me kuch Zindagi niras hi ho gyi...jis ghar me mujhe khusiya hi milti thi wo ghar aaj katne ko dod rha tha...karib 5 din bad Aanchal ka phone aaya... usne mujhe bataya ki wo Rajeev ke saath hai aur 3 din bad wo log shadi karne wale hai...jise sunkar me bohot khus huwa...aur dil me umeed jagi ki mere wo khushal din phir lot kar aa sakte hai.
Par mujhe kya pta tha ki wo last bar tha jab me Aanchu ki awaj sun rha tha...kyuki uske bad kabhi bhi Aanchu ka phone nahi aaya... mummy-papa ko to is baat se shayad fark hi nahi pad rha tha ki unki beti ghar chod kar chali gayi...wo log pehle ki tarah apni life me mast the jaise Aanchal kabhi unke sath thi hi nahi...is baat ko aaj 3 saal beet gaye hai...aaj bhi mujhe uski utni hi yaad aati hai... me ye sab baate Aanchu aur mera photo hath me lekar soch rha tha apni desk par betha aur khidki se bahar jhak rha tha...aur ye samajne ki Koshis kar rha tha aakhir isme kiska dosh hai.
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