Shoorveer .....
Ek Yoddha
ki Ankahi Dastaan...
Ek Yoddha
ki Ankahi Dastaan...
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Veer Raheja yaad rakhna yeh naam sayad iss naam ko aapne pahle kabhi naa suna magar abb jarur yaad rakhoge. Uske v bahut kaaran hai dhire dhire malum chalega.
Veer Raheja ek sampann parivar me paida hua jaha kahne ko sabhi rishtedar the magar veer ka apna matlab joh dil ke karib ho aaj tak aisa koi nhi tha. Haa sikhsha dene aur thoda bahut pyaar ke liye dadi aur nani aur thode dusre rishtedar ko shrey de sakte hai. Magar jab apne hi maa baap ka apna baccha thoda kasht dayak lagne lage toh samjh jana chahiye ki abb uss bacche ki zindagi assan nhi hone wali. Kuch aisa hi veer ke saath hua.
Suruwati daur se hi veer thoda sanjida aur shaant baccha raha hai. Iska karan hai ki uske maa baap yeh nhi chahte the ki yeh baccha ho. Veer ke maa aur baap ko koi baccha nhi chahiye tha. Isi wajah se uski maa ne abortion ka tablet khaa liya magar phir v veer aya. Jab doctor ke pass gye toh kaha bacche ko abort nhi kar sakte kyunki veer ki maa ke sath kuch complications ho gyi. Magar kahte hai na bhagwan jisko zinda rakhne ka soch lete hai woh zinda hi rahta . Waisa hi veer ke saath hua. Veer ki maa working woman thi toh koi parhej nhi karti sab kuch khana pina joh Mann hota, wine- beer sabkuch. Doctor ne kaha v ki baache ne kya bigara hai. Toh kahti mera baccha hai mai joh karu waise v mai yeh baccha nhi chahti hu. Veer ke maa ke galat aadaton ki wajah se veer shant aur thoda normal paida nhi hua. Magar joh v complications thi doctor ne kah diya kuch saalon me thik ho jayengi dhirre dhirre chala jayega.
Magar kuch saalon baad 4 saal ki umar me hi nursery se hi boarding bhej diya gya. Kuch logo ne virodh kiya magar veer ke maa- baap ne saaf kah diya ki no hamare pass time nhi bachta. Kuch logo ko gussa v aya ki jab time hai toh baccha kyu kiya. Magar kah nhi sakte the. Toh veer boarding me raha poore 8th tak phir uske maa- baap ke bich divorce hone ke karan koi school ka fee nhi pay karna chahta tha toh uske mama ne daya ke taur par apne pass rakh liya. Bich me uske baap ko yaad aya ki uska ek beta hai toh usne kuch sahi aadmiyon se salah leke military ya uss type ke kuch scchols me form fill kar diya. Aise schools me kisi ka zaldi recommendation nhi chalta kyunki yaha free me padhayi hoti hai Ya na ke barabar fee hota hai. Usme se ek me veer ka selection 9th class me ho gya aur fir military school chala gya. Waha isne poore apne jiwan ke 7-8 saal bitaye hai. Army me ek acche pad par hai. Aaj woh 8 saal poore 8 saal baad wapas aa raha hai woh v sirf apni Nani ki wajah se kyunki woh bimar hai aur woh chahti hai ki ek baar usse v dekh le. Veer v inkar nhi kar pata hai. Aur woh chutti lekar ghar aa raha hai.
Nanihal ka intro:-
Nana- Ratan lal Sharma- Kuch saal pehle ek hadse me maare gaye.
Nani- Usha( age- 60) Dikhne me 45 se jayda nhi kyunki gaav me rehkar kaam karne se gathila badan hai . Pati ke hadse me maar jane se thoda sadma laga hai aur tab se bed par hai. Inki 4 bacche hai 2 beta 2 beti.
B.Mama- Karun Sharma- (age-45) Aam aadmi hai ek sarkari naukari karte hai. Mehnat ki wajah se chehra dhasa hua aur mukh par hamesha thakan jaisa ek middle class ka aadmi hota hai.
B.Mami- Rajeshwari ( age - 44) halki sawli aur dil ki acchi magar paise aur bacchon ki chinta ne chidchida bana diya hai. Sarkari naukari purani hai toh paise kaam jod payi aur inko sirf 2 betiyan hi hai toh unki shaadi kaise hogi yahi chinta rahti hai.
1St Beti- Aditi ( age 25 ) jaisa naam waisa kaam bahut hi suljhi, sundar aur sanskari. M.A kiya hua hai bahut hi intelligent hai magar usse aage padhayi nhi ki aur gaav ke school me hi ek private teacher join kar liya hai timepass ke liye.
2nd Beti- Aaradhana - ( age 23) thodi chanchal aur mastikhor magar hai samjhdar yeh v. Ussi school me yeh accountant hai. Yeh v bahut sundar hai.
Chote mama aur mausi judwa hai.
C.Mama- Sanjay( age- 44) yeh v middle class ke trah hi hai magar befikar rahne wale. Na tention na chinta apne me magan. Yeh kheti karte hai.
C.Mami - lata ( 42 - age ) bahut hi tez tarar. Aankh hamesha khuli rahti hai.
Beti - drishti - 24 ki hui hai. Aapne baap ki ladli aur muphat sab ladke darte hai. Kisi ko v chipka deti hai. Ussi school me yeh v teacher hai, Jis school me Aditi hai.
Beta - tarun- abhi bahut 5th me hi hai. Badmash hai poora ka poora.
Veer Raheja yaad rakhna yeh naam sayad iss naam ko aapne pahle kabhi naa suna magar abb jarur yaad rakhoge. Uske v bahut kaaran hai dhire dhire malum chalega.
Veer Raheja ek sampann parivar me paida hua jaha kahne ko sabhi rishtedar the magar veer ka apna matlab joh dil ke karib ho aaj tak aisa koi nhi tha. Haa sikhsha dene aur thoda bahut pyaar ke liye dadi aur nani aur thode dusre rishtedar ko shrey de sakte hai. Magar jab apne hi maa baap ka apna baccha thoda kasht dayak lagne lage toh samjh jana chahiye ki abb uss bacche ki zindagi assan nhi hone wali. Kuch aisa hi veer ke saath hua.
Suruwati daur se hi veer thoda sanjida aur shaant baccha raha hai. Iska karan hai ki uske maa baap yeh nhi chahte the ki yeh baccha ho. Veer ke maa aur baap ko koi baccha nhi chahiye tha. Isi wajah se uski maa ne abortion ka tablet khaa liya magar phir v veer aya. Jab doctor ke pass gye toh kaha bacche ko abort nhi kar sakte kyunki veer ki maa ke sath kuch complications ho gyi. Magar kahte hai na bhagwan jisko zinda rakhne ka soch lete hai woh zinda hi rahta . Waisa hi veer ke saath hua. Veer ki maa working woman thi toh koi parhej nhi karti sab kuch khana pina joh Mann hota, wine- beer sabkuch. Doctor ne kaha v ki baache ne kya bigara hai. Toh kahti mera baccha hai mai joh karu waise v mai yeh baccha nhi chahti hu. Veer ke maa ke galat aadaton ki wajah se veer shant aur thoda normal paida nhi hua. Magar joh v complications thi doctor ne kah diya kuch saalon me thik ho jayengi dhirre dhirre chala jayega.
Magar kuch saalon baad 4 saal ki umar me hi nursery se hi boarding bhej diya gya. Kuch logo ne virodh kiya magar veer ke maa- baap ne saaf kah diya ki no hamare pass time nhi bachta. Kuch logo ko gussa v aya ki jab time hai toh baccha kyu kiya. Magar kah nhi sakte the. Toh veer boarding me raha poore 8th tak phir uske maa- baap ke bich divorce hone ke karan koi school ka fee nhi pay karna chahta tha toh uske mama ne daya ke taur par apne pass rakh liya. Bich me uske baap ko yaad aya ki uska ek beta hai toh usne kuch sahi aadmiyon se salah leke military ya uss type ke kuch scchols me form fill kar diya. Aise schools me kisi ka zaldi recommendation nhi chalta kyunki yaha free me padhayi hoti hai Ya na ke barabar fee hota hai. Usme se ek me veer ka selection 9th class me ho gya aur fir military school chala gya. Waha isne poore apne jiwan ke 7-8 saal bitaye hai. Army me ek acche pad par hai. Aaj woh 8 saal poore 8 saal baad wapas aa raha hai woh v sirf apni Nani ki wajah se kyunki woh bimar hai aur woh chahti hai ki ek baar usse v dekh le. Veer v inkar nhi kar pata hai. Aur woh chutti lekar ghar aa raha hai.
Nanihal ka intro:-
Nana- Ratan lal Sharma- Kuch saal pehle ek hadse me maare gaye.
Nani- Usha( age- 60) Dikhne me 45 se jayda nhi kyunki gaav me rehkar kaam karne se gathila badan hai . Pati ke hadse me maar jane se thoda sadma laga hai aur tab se bed par hai. Inki 4 bacche hai 2 beta 2 beti.
B.Mama- Karun Sharma- (age-45) Aam aadmi hai ek sarkari naukari karte hai. Mehnat ki wajah se chehra dhasa hua aur mukh par hamesha thakan jaisa ek middle class ka aadmi hota hai.
B.Mami- Rajeshwari ( age - 44) halki sawli aur dil ki acchi magar paise aur bacchon ki chinta ne chidchida bana diya hai. Sarkari naukari purani hai toh paise kaam jod payi aur inko sirf 2 betiyan hi hai toh unki shaadi kaise hogi yahi chinta rahti hai.
1St Beti- Aditi ( age 25 ) jaisa naam waisa kaam bahut hi suljhi, sundar aur sanskari. M.A kiya hua hai bahut hi intelligent hai magar usse aage padhayi nhi ki aur gaav ke school me hi ek private teacher join kar liya hai timepass ke liye.
2nd Beti- Aaradhana - ( age 23) thodi chanchal aur mastikhor magar hai samjhdar yeh v. Ussi school me yeh accountant hai. Yeh v bahut sundar hai.
Chote mama aur mausi judwa hai.
C.Mama- Sanjay( age- 44) yeh v middle class ke trah hi hai magar befikar rahne wale. Na tention na chinta apne me magan. Yeh kheti karte hai.
C.Mami - lata ( 42 - age ) bahut hi tez tarar. Aankh hamesha khuli rahti hai.
Beti - drishti - 24 ki hui hai. Aapne baap ki ladli aur muphat sab ladke darte hai. Kisi ko v chipka deti hai. Ussi school me yeh v teacher hai, Jis school me Aditi hai.
Beta - tarun- abhi bahut 5th me hi hai. Badmash hai poora ka poora.