Incest Baadshah ~ The tales of Debauchery By Werewolf

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Introduction :


Characters ke baare me zyaada kuch nahi bataunga. Aap khud unke baare me padh ke unhe jaaniyega. Ek chota sa intro de raha hu taaki relationship samajh aa sake aapko.

1. Veer (age - 20 yrs) : Kahani ka Main character.

2. Manorath (age - 80 yrs) : Veer ke Dada jii. Paramparao aur anusaashan ko boht maante hai. Ghar me jo sabse anusaashit hai aur buddhimatta se bharpoor hai ussi ko ye mehatv dete hai. Inke 2 petrol pump the jo inhone apne baccho me baant diye.

3. Brijesh (age -56 yrs) : Veer ke Dad, Manorath ka bada ladka. Ek petrol pump ka maalik hai. Uske alaawa ek luxury hotel hai jisse uski patni sambhaalti hai.

4. Shweta (age - 47 yrs) : Veer ki sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Brijesh ki dusri patni. Shweta kahi se bhi 47 ki prateet nahi hoti. Ye Brijesh dwara banwai gayi hotel ki maalkin hai aur usse apni beti ke saath sambhaalti hai.



5. Bhumika (age - 25 yrs) : Shweta aur uske pehle pati ki eklauti beti, Veer ki Step-sister. B.com aur hotel management ka course karne ke baad ab apni Maa ke saath hotel sambhaalti hai.




6. Karunesh (age - 55 yrs) : Manorath ka dusra beta, Veer ke chacha. Brijesh ka chota bhai hai aur saath hi uss dusre petrol pump ka maalik.

7. Sumitra (age - 49 yrs) : Karunesh ki patni, Veer ki chachi. Gadrayi hui hai par moti kahi se bhi nahi. Badi badi chhuchiya, gori makhmali twacha, nain naksh jo madhosh kar de.



8. Vivek (age - 28 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka bada beta. Karunesh ne Vivek pe kaafi paisa kharch kiya hai jiske chalte aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company hai.

9. Ragini (age - 27 yrs) : Vivek ki patni, Veer ki Bhabhi. Qayaamat hai ekdum Ragini. Ek aisi ladki jisse harr koi apni banaana chaahe. Jisse dekh ke muh se bas yahi nikaalta hai ki kaash ye meri hoti.



10. Arohi (age - 22 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki badi beti. Veer ke hi same college me uski senior hai. Kam bolti hai. Dikhne me khubsoorat aur alag kism ki beauty hai ye. Isse dekh ke nasha sa chadh jae kisi ko bhi.



11. Pranjal (age - 21 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ka chota beta. Abhi B.com kar raha hai same college se.

12. Kavya (age - 18 yrs) : Karunesh aur Sumitra ki choti beti. Chanchal, sharmeeli aur thodi savendansheel. Abhi abhi college me aayi hai toh abhi duniya daari ke baare utna sab nahi pata. Dikhne me ekdum Cute hai aur pyaari.



Ye tha intro, baaki characters samay aane par introduce hote jaenge.

Dhanyavaad!
 
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Update -1 ~ Unforgetful Incident.
*Thud*

Ek zorrdaar dhakka Veer ki peeth par pada aur wo saamne ki orr girte girte bacha.

"Hahahahaha!!!"

Aur tabhi peeche se kayi logo ki hassne ki awaazein sunayi dii.

Veer ke haath kaanp rahe the. Dhakke ke kaaran uska mobile phone girte girte bacha tha, usne forun hi usse apne kaapte hue haatho me kass ke thaama aur phone ki screen on karke wo contact list me se kisi ka naam dhund ke usne apna phone kaano ki orr badhaaya hi tha ki tabhi...

*Thud*

Ek aur dhakka zorr se uski peeth par pada, par iss baar wo khud ko sambhaal na saka aur saamne ki orr dhadaam se gir pada. Uska phone haatho se chhutak kar kayi tappa khaate hue zameen par jaa gira. Pata nahi sahi salaamat bacha bhi tha uska phone ya nahi.

Veer ne karaahte hue apni nazre upar kari aur dekha. Kareeb 5 se 6 ladke uske saamne khade hue the. Aur unka leader jiska naam Ajay tha wo apni Duke bike par adab ke saath baithe hue uski iss haalat par mazze le raha tha.

Ajay : Hahaha! Kyu be chuze! Bol!? Karega aisi harqat dubaara?

Apne kaapte hue perro ko Veer ne badi hi mushqil se control kiya aur utha.

Akhir uski galti kya thi? Aaj uske apne college me 2nd year ka pehla din tha aur pehle din hi uske saath ye sab ho raha tha?

Shaam ke 7 baj chuke the aur Veer jisse 2 ghante pehle hi apne ghar pohuch jaana chaahiye tha wo yaha 6 se 7 ladko dwaara bully kiya jaa raha tha.

Veer shuru se hi ek kamzor yuvak tha. Usse dekh ke aisa lagta tha maano uski rachna bhagwaan ne badi hi kathorta se kari ho.

Na wo padhayi me hoshiyaar tha, na dikhne me koi boht handsome tha, shareer se bhi kamzor tha, bol chaal me bhi ekdum peeche aur usme koi bhi talent nahi tha. Kul milaake ek bhondu sa insaan.

Apne naam ka ulta hi tha Veer. Veerta naam ki toh koi cheez hi nahi thi usme. Par bechaare usme uski kya galti thi? Wo toh jesa tha, wesa tha. Kya uski iss baat ka fayda uthaana zaroori tha?

Aaj wo yaha college ke peeche ki sunsaan sadko me maujood tha. Wo aana nahi chaahta tha par usse yaha laaya gaya tha.



Saamne khade uske college ke seniors uspe atyachaar karne ke liye usse yaha sunsaan jagah par lae hue the.

Par isme Veer ki galti kya thi?

Uski galti ye thi ki aaj college ke departure ke waqt wo ek khubsoorat senior ladki ko dekh raha tha jo ki laazmi tha. Wo thi hi itni khubsoorat ki koi bhi usse dekh ke apni nazre na hata paata. Wo patli kamar, teekhe nain, bhaari stan, perfect figure aur wo qaatilaana chehra. Kisi ko bhi madhosh kar de.

Par badqismati se Veer jab uss sundar ladki ko taad raha tha, Ajay ne usse aisa karte dekh pakad liya tha.

Aur bas, yahi Veer ki galti thi.

Wo ladki Ajay ki kaafi acchi dost thi jiske peeche Ajay haath dhoke kaafi samay se pada hua tha. Uss ladki ka naam tha Pragya, jo ki Ajay ki classmate thi.

Veer ki nazar ne hi Ajay ko itna gussa dila diya tha ki uska mann kar raha tha ki wo ussi waqt Veer ki aankhein noch le. Akhir himmat kese hui kisi ladke ki uski hone waali gf ko taktaki laga ke dekhne ki.

College me kisi ne bhi aaj tak uske khilaaf jaane ki himmat nahi kii thi. Toh fir akhir iss Veer ki kese himmat ho gayi?

Yahi baat Ajay ko bilkul na khali.

Veer ko yaha laake aaj wo usse accha sabak sikhaane waala tha. Taaki, bhavishya me koi bhi uski Pragya ko ghurne se pehle 100 baar soche.

Ajay (gurraate hue) : Mene kuch pucha tere se chuze. Bol? Karega aisi harqat firse?

Veer bhale hi kamzor tha par wo apne khud ke prati imaandaar zaroor tha. Usse pata tha usne koi galti nahi kii hai. Akhir ek sundar ladki ko yadi aapne kuch seconds dekh liya toh kya wo aapki galti hai? Bilkul bhi nahi! Veer toh keval Pragya ki sundarta ki prashansha kar raha tha mann hi mann.
Isme pitaayi ki baat kaha se aa gayi?

Aur yahi dhyaan me rakhte hue usne Ajay ke sawaal ka koi uttar nahi diya. Wo bas chup chaap apna nichla honth daanto se dabaaye hue sar jhukae khada raha. Uski mutthi zorr se kassi hui thi.

Ajay : Ye aise nahi maanega. Dose do saale ko.

Uski baat sunn uske saare saathi Veer ki taraf badhne lage. Jese jese Veer peeche jaata, wese wese wo aur kareeb aate.

Aur kuch pal ke andar hi Veer ab 6 logo se ghira hua tha. Iske pehle ki wo kuch keh paata, unn 6 ke 6 laundo ne Veer pe mukke aur laate barsaana shuru kar dii.

"Aaarghhhhhhh"

Veer ki karaahne ki awaaz sunsaan road me gunj rahi thi par na toh koi sunn'ne wala tha aur na hi koi madad karne waala. Wo ladke rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the.

Koi uske pait me maarta toh koi uske gaal pe, koi peeth pe vaar karta toh koi uski pasli pe. Aur harr ek hamle par Veer ke muh se ek dard bhari cheenkh nikal jaati jo uss sunsaan sadak ki shaanti ko jhanjhor kar rakh deti. Dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi palo me wo ab neeche gir chuka tha.

Usne apne haatho se apna sar bachaaya aur perr sikode par ladko ko toh jese farq hi nahi padna tha.
Apni laate uthaate hue unn sabhi ne uspe itne vaar kiye ki uske maathe aur hontho se khoon behne laga.

Jab Ajay ne qareeb aake wo laal khoon dekha toh usse andar hi andar ek sukoon sa mila. Jese uska gussa kuch hadd tak shaant ho gaya tha. Usne forun hi apne pantaro ko rok diya.

Apni laat uthaate hue usne apna joota Veer ke sar par rakh diya.

Ajay : Samajh aaya chuze? Yadi tune itna keh diya hota ki ahinda se tu aisi harqat nahi karega toh tere saath ye sab nahi hota.

Veer ne koi jawaab nahi diya. Wo bas apni jese tese adhkhuli aankho se Ajay ko ghur raha tha.

Ajay : Par tujhe bann'na tha hero. Hai na? Toh lo fir! Ab banke dikha hero. Kaan khol ke sunn le chuze, ahinda se tu yadi mujhe galti se bhi Pragya ke aas paas bhi dikha na toh teri gaand tod ke rakh dunga. Samjha behanchod?

Kehte hue Ajay ne apne perr ka bhaar badhaate hue Veer ka chehra masal diya jiske chalte uski ek aur cheenkh nikal gayi.

Ajay : Aulelelele bacche ko dard ho raha hai? Ruko abhi dard dur kar deta hu. Zara wo lollipop toh laana. Dekho idhar ek baccha ro raha hai.

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ladke zorr zorr se thahaake lagaane lage.

Unn ladko me se ek ne apna bag khola aur ek lollipop nikaalte hue Ajay ko thama dii.

Ajay ne forun hi lollipop ka wrapper khola aur Veer ki taraf neeche jhuk gaya.

Ajay : Tujhe pata hai mein ye lollipop leke kyu ghumta hu hamesha? Taaki tujh jese bacche jab udham karne lagte hai na toh unki aqal thikaane laga saku.

Itna bol wo lollipop zorr se Veer ke muh me ghusa dii jiske chalte ek aur karaah Veer ke muh se nikli.

Ajay : Par fir bacche rone lag jaate hai toh akhir bade hone ke naate mera farz bhi toh banta hai na? Ki mein unhe chup karwau? Isliye uske liye ye lollipop. Ab acche bacche ki tarah ye lollipop chuso aur apne ghar ki orr nikal lena. Samjha?

Usne Veer ka gaal thap thapaaya aur jaane ke liye uth khada hua par jaane se pehle wo ek baar aur peeche muda aur Veer ko dekha.

Ajay : Police ya ghar me kuch bhi bataane ki koshish karna bhi mat chuze. Baad me tu hi pachtaega nahi toh. Infact, kisi ke saamne bhi muh mat kholna.

Ladka 1 : Ajay bhai halki bunda baandi shuru ho gayi hai, hume nikalna chahiye.

Uske ek dost ne jataaya toh Ajay ne bhi haa me gardan hilaayi.

Aur Ajay samet sabhi ladke apni apni bike par sawaar hue par tabhi Ajay ko kuch sujha aur wo apni bike neeche pade Veer ke ird gird ghumaane laga aur uske dost bhi yahi karne lage.

*Crack*

Veer ne zorr se uss lollipop ka apne daanto se katra. Uski aankhein gusse se laal thi par wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Ladke uske ird gird bike ko ghuma rahe the aur agle hi pal Ajay ne uski orr thuka jiske chalte wo thook seedha jaate hue Veer ki shirt par gira.

"Hahahahaha"

*Vroom* *Vroom*

Hasste hue Ajay apni toli ke saath, bike par sawaar waha se nikal gaya. Aur uss sunsaan jagah pe ab keval Veer hi akela pada hua tha.

Bijli kadki aur tezz baarish shuru ho gayi. Yahi Veer ki kismat thi. Ab toh uske kapde bhi bheeg jaane the. Par baarish se ek baat acchi hui. Wo ye ki Veer ki shirt me gira Ajay ka thook dhul gaya.

*Thuu*

Lollipop ko zorr se thukte hue Veer khada hua toh wo ladkhada gaya aur girte girte bacha. Harr jagah itna dard tha ki pucho mat. Baarish tezz ho chuki thi aur wo langdaate hue apni scooty ke paas jese tese pohucha aur seat par tik ke baith gaya.

Baarish ke pani se uske maathe se nikal raha khoon bhi saaf hone laga tha. Usne apna phone uthaate hue apne jeb me daal liya. Pata nahi zinda bhi tha uska phone ya nahi, kyuki screen ki light abhi tak jal rahi thi.

Par Veer ko toh jese kuch farq hi nahi padna tha. Wo haafte hue bas baitha sadak ko ghur raha tha jaha abhi wo kuch derr pehle buri tarah laato aur ghuso ka shikaar hua tha.

Ab toh usme apni muthhi kassne tak ke liye dum nahi bacha tha. Kya kismat dii thi bhagwaan ne usse.

Aaj pehla din aur uske saath ye vyavhaar hua. Upar se tab, jab uski koi galti bhi nahi thi. Kya ek khubsoorat ladki ko dekhna gunaah tha? Jab uss ladki ne usse kuch nahi kaha toh bhala ye Ajay kon hota tha uske saath aisa suluk karne waala?

Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ki rulaayi chhuuth padi. Aur wo bina koi awaaz kiye zorr zorr se rone laga. Shareer poora bheeg chuka tha uska. Aur baarish ki boonde jese hi uske ghaavo par padti usse aur zyada dard deti.

Rote rote Veer ne apni scooty uthayi aur ghar ki taraf chal diya. Usse hi pata tha ki wo kitni mushqil se iss waqt scooty ko chala raha tha. Uske jeb me uska phone abhi bhi contact list show kar raha tha.

Shayad girne ke kaaran phone ki screen ek jagah jaa ke atak chuki thi. Uss contact list me uska koi bhi dost nahi tha. School me bhi uske dost nahi the aur aaj bhi college me wo akela hi baitha hua tha. Contact list me keval 3 hi naam the. Ek uske pita Brijesh ka, ek uski chachi Sumitra ka aur ek uski choti behan Kavya ka.

Jinhe call karne ki Veer uss waqt acting kar raha tha. Jii haa! Acting kar raha tha. Kyuki Veer jaanta tha, Brijesh ko pata chalega toh wo ulta aur maarega hi usse. Sumitra aur Kavya isme kuch nahi kar sakti thi. Rahi baat baaki family members ki toh unke numbers the hi nahi uske phone me.

Uske gharwaale uski madad bilkul na karte.

Akhir kyu?

Kyuki yahi toh uska parivaar tha. Keval naam ka parivaar tha baaki uski ghar me kya hi izzat thi wo bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Ab tak usse ghar se nikaala nahi gaya tha yahi baat kaafi thi.

Usse itna prataadit kiya jaata tha ki pucho mat. Pata nahi kese wo unn sab ke beech itne saal tak jee liya.

Yadi koi aur hota toh gusse me khud hi bhaag gaya hota ya ab tak trast aa chuka hota aur na jaane kya kar liya hota. Par Veer chup chaap sab kuch sehta tha.

Kyuki usse pata tha ki virodh karne ka koi fayda nahi tha. Aur yadi wo jaata bhi toh kaha jaata? Wo 20 saal ka hi tha aur abhi toh usne college ki duniya bhi thik se nahi dekhi thi.

Par aaj jo hua uss se Veer ko itna toh samajh aa gaya tha ki college ki life ke bache hue baaki 3 saal uski school life se kayi guna battar hone waale the.

Veer tezz raftaar me gaadi chalaaye jaa raha tha. Baarish aur aasuo ke kaaran uski aankein dhundhli ho chali thi. Gaadiyo ki headlights ki roshni kisi jugnu ke prakaar uski aankho me aati aur jaati.

Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.

Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.

'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'
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Kahani shuru ho chuki hai.
Ab se mein aur aap iss kahani ka safar saath me tay karenge aur isse ant tak pohuchaenge.
Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
 
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Update - 2 ~ The Family

Ab tak...

Kuch derr pehle hui ghatna uske imaan, uske gaurav, uski izzat ko chhalli kar ke uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi.

Par wo ruka nahi. Yu aasu bahaate hue wo apne ghar ki orr gaadi badhaata raha jo ab bas kuch hi dur tha.

'Badla toh mein lunga. I'll make them pay. Chun chun ke... Ek ek se chun chun ke badla lunga.'

Ab aage...

Mumbai, jisse Mayanagri ke naam se bhi jaana jaata hai, uss sheher me ek boht hi aalishaan bangle me kuch log badi hi serious hoke ek kamre me dheemi awaaz me baatein kar rahe the.

"Aaj kese bhi karke uska patta saaf kar do. Samjhe?" Ek ladke ne bhaari awaaz me kaha.

Uske peeche khade ek naujavaan ladke ne uski orr dekha aur haa me gardan hilaayi, "Tension mat lo Bhaiya. Aaj uska patta saaf ho jaega. Mene bada hi tagda plan banaya hai hahaha!"

"Kesa plan?"

"Bhaiya! Aap bas dekhte jao. Aaj Dada jii ke decision lete samay hi sab kuch hoega. Mein show grand rakhna chaahta hu hahaha!"

"Shabaash chote! Bas dhyaan rahe koi gadbad na ho. Aur yadi hoye bhi toh tumhara naam bilkul bhi saamne na aaye. Samjhe?"

"Haa Vivek Bhaiya! Don't worry! Ye Pranjal jo bhi karta hai ekdum solid karta hai." Pranjal ne apni chhaati thap thapaate hue kaha.

Vivek : Good!

Muskuraate hue Vivek, Pranjal ka bada bhai uske kamre se nikal gaya.

Abhi wo nikla hi tha ki darwaaze ke baahar hi uski nayi naveli patni, Ragini usse dekhte hi bol padi. "Arre! Tum yaha ho? Chalo jaldi! Kuch derr me Dada jii apna decision dene waale hai. Sabhi hall me ikkhatta ho rahe hai."

Ragini ek boht hi gazab ki stree thi. Uska jism itna perfect tha maano bhagwaan ne badi hi fursat se usse banaaya tha. 27 saal ki Ragini ke stan kasse hue the aur saree me toh wo qayamat hi dhaa deti thi.

Uska gora rang, patle hontho me halki gulaabi lipstick, kamar tak latakte khule kaale baal jo neeche se curled the, uske husn par chaar chaand laga dete the. Ragini ka baap TVS ke 2 showrooms ka maalik tha. Paiso ki toh koi kami hi nahi thi uske paas. Aur Vivek ko aisi patni mili thi, uski kismat ke akhir kya kehne the.

Par Vivek bhi koi aera gerra nahi tha. Jab aisi patni usse mili ho toh andaaza lagaana mushqil nahi tha ki Vivek ka khud ka parivaar kitna ameer tha.

Ragini ki baat sunn Vivek ne kamre me jhaanka.

Vivek (chillaate hue) : Chote! Chal baahar jaldi.

Pranjal : Bhaiya! Aap jao mujhe toh important kaam hai. Haha!

Ragini prashn bhari nazro se Vivek ko dekhi, "Pranjal ko kya kaam bhala iss waqt!?"

Vivek : Tum chalo! Aaj toh behatreen show hone waala hai. Hahaha!

Aur hasste hue Vivek Ragini ko leke waha se chala gaya.

Par Ragini ki toh samajh me hi naa aaya ki akhir chal kya raha tha. Ab jab uske pati ne kaha tha kuch badhiya hone waala hai toh Ragini keval intezaar hi kar sakti thi.

*Click*

Veer ne apne ghar pohuch kar apni scooty se chaavi ghumaate hue gaadi band kari aur usse jeb me rakhte hue wo gaadi se utra.

Wo apne ghar pohuch chuka tha. Keval naam ke liye ghar tha. Ek ghar me ek aadmi khushiya paata hai, apno ka pyaar paata hai, ghar me ekta rehti hai par uske ghar ka ekdum alag hi scene tha.

Jaha aadmi apne ghar pohuch kar sukoon paata hai aur khush hota hai, Veer iss waqt andar jaane se hi katra raha tha aur darr bhi raha tha.

Shaam ke 7:30 baj chuke the. Aur wo paani se bheega, halke khoon se sana hua yaha khada hua tha. Usne apni scooty ke mirror me apni shaqal dekhi toh paaya uski ek aankh poori neel pad chuki thi. Itni buri tarah dhoya tha usse Ajay aur uske saathiyo ne.

"Aaarghhhh!" Karaahte hue usne apna ek haath apni pasli par ferra.

Wo apne qadam aage badhaate hue darwaaze ki orr badha. Uska ghar jo ki nark se kam nahi tha. Wo itna aalishaan tha ki jisse log dekhne ke baad tareefo ke pul baandhne lagte the.

Par unhe kya pata tha ki uss bunglow me andar rehne waale log kese the.

Veer abhi badh ke darwaaze par aaya hi tha ki itne me uske kaano me kisi ki awaaz padi.

"Arre!? Ye mein kya dekh raha hu? Tau jii ka eklauta beta iss haal me? Aur wo bhi aaj apne college ke second year ke pehle din?"

Awaaz sunte hi Veer ke perr wahi tham gaye. Saamne nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki uske chacha ka chota beta, Pranjal saamne khada hua tha.

Jii haa! Wo bungalow Veer ka hi tha.

Pranjal forun aage badh usse sahaara dene ke liye hua toh Veer ne uska haath gusse me jhatak diya aur apne perro par hi khada raha.

Pranjal : Arre!? Arre!? Mein toh bas tumhari madad kar raha tha chote bhai! Tumhari ye haalat kisne kii? Naam batao tum khaali, dekhna tumhara Bhai kya haal karega uss shaks ka.

Par Veer jaanta tha. Jo kuch bhi iss waqt Pranjal ke muh se nikal raha tha, jhooth ke alaawa wo aur kuch nahi ho sakta tha.

Uske jaisa kapti aur sayaana insaan shayad hi Veer ne apni poori life me kabhi dekha hoga.

Pranjal : Chote bhai! Dada jii ka janmdin hai aaj. Gussa thook do bhai. Chalo accha meri madad karwa do.

Par Veer toh jese kuch sunn'na hi nahi chaahta tha. Wo andar jaane laga ki ek baar fir Pranjal ne uska kandha thaam liya.

Pranjal : Bhai! Aaj Dada jii apna decision sunaane waale hai. Unhe kitna accha lagega yadi tum unhe apne haatho se unke janmdin par gift doge. Hai na? Apna gussa apne upar haavi hone mat do chote bhai! Chalo! Andar tumhara sab intezaar kar rahe hai.

Veer bhale hi gusse me tha, par wo apne Dada jii ki badi hi izzat karta tha. Aur unhe maanta bhi tha. Aaj uske Dada jii ka janmdin tha aur usne pehle se hi apne Dada jii ke liye ek gift taiyaar kar ke apne kamre me rakha hua tha. Jese tese Veer ne apna gussa nigla.

Veer : Aap chalo! Mein apne kamre se Dada jii ke liye gift leke aata hu.

Pranjal : Arre kya keh rahe ho Bhai? Dada jii aur baaki sab pehle se hi tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai aur aise me tum unhe aur intezaar karwaoge? Tum apni haalat ke baare me mat socho. Hum sab toh tumhaare apne hi hai hai na? Fir humaare saamne kesi jhijhak? Aao...

Aur Pranjal usse kheechte hue bangle ke andar le gaya. Chaahte hue bhi Veer uska virodh na kar paaya.

Andar ghuste hi ek mini hall tha jaha baahari vyaktiyo ko baithaaya jaata tha. Aur khaas logo ko hi uske andar waale Bade hall me entry allowed thi.

Abhi Pranjal aur Veer dono hi mini hall me the jaha ek khubsoorat sa flower vase maujood tha. Uske ird gird ek laal ribbon lipta hua tha aur Happy Birthday ka ek tag bhi laga hua tha.

Jab Veer ki nazar uspe padi toh woh usse dekhte hi chaunk gaya. Jo ki laazmi tha. Wo flower vase itna mehnga aur itna sundar prateet ho raha tha ki koi bhi usse ek baar dekhne ke baad dubaara zaroor dekhta.

Pranjal (khush hote hue) : Yahi hai wo gift chote bhai. Tau jii yaani ki tumhaare Dad ne khud isse mangwaaya hai. Aur yadi tum Dada jii ko apne haatho se ye gift doge toh woh kitna khush ho jaenge nahi!?

Par Veer jaanta tha ki ye Pranjal jo iss waqt bhed jesa maasoom prateet ho raha tha wo asal me bhed nahi balki bhed ke vesh me ek bhediya tha.

Veer ne naa chaahte hue bhi haa me sar hilaaya aur vase uthaake wo dono hi andar bade hall me pravesh kiye.

Bada hall itna bada tha aur lights se itna jagmaga raha tha ki dekhne waale dekhte hi reh jae. Upar na jaane kitna mehnga ek jhumar latka hua tha jisse dekh ke bas muh se tareef nikalti.

Andar ek single seat luxury waale sofe par Veer ke Dada jii baithe hue the. Aaj unka 80th Birthday tha. Aur unke agal bagal waale sofe par unke do bete baithe hue tha. Bada beta jiska naam tha Brijesh. Aur chota beta jiska naam tha Karunesh.

Karunesh : Papa jii aapko party rakh leni chahiye thi.

Manorath : Hmph! Kabhi bhi ye galti mat karna. Ye sab party jo tum log karte ho na issi ke kaaran tumhaare dushman badhte hai. Jitni raeesi logo ko dikhaoge, utne hi galat iraade logo ke mann me umadte hai.

Veer ke Dada jii ne hidaayat dete hue kaha.

Idhar andar jese hi Veer aur Pranjal aae, sabhi ki nazre un dono par jaa tiki.

Veer ke pita, Brijesh ne jese hi apne ladke ki haalat dekhi toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Usne sofe ke hatte ko itni zorr se bheencha maano usse ukhaad ke hi fek dega.

Kya Brijesh ka ye gussa apne bete ko iss haalat me dekh ke uska ye haal karne waale ke upar tha?

Bilkul bhi nahi!

Balki Brijesh iss waqt apne bete par gussa tha. Yadi abhi koi aur maujood na hota toh usne khade hoke pehle hi 2-4 jhaapad Veer ko raseed diye hote.

Uska beta wo bhi aise haal me? Veer ka ye roop maano Brijesh ki image par ek chaata tha. Na jaane uske baaki ghar waale kya soch rahe honge ab aise me.

Yahi sochke usse itna gussa aa raha tha par uske pita ka aaj janmdin tha aur wo kuch bhi bakheda khada karna nahi chaahta tha.

Nakli smile dete hue usne apne bete Veer ko dekha.

Brijesh : Aa gaye!? Kaha reh gaye the itni derr tak? Aur ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai apni? Kis se maar kha ke aa rahe ho?

Veer ki maano ye sawaal sunte hi sitti pitti gul ho gayi. Apne Dad ki bhaari bharkam awaaz sunte hi uske andar ka darr jaag utha. Uske haanth kaanpne lage the.

Iske pehle wo kuch jawaab de paata, bagal me khade Pranjal ne tapaak se bola.

Pranjal : Tau jii! Yahi baat mene Veer se baahar abhi puchi thi. Toh Veer kehne laga ki aaj usse ek senior ladki pasand aa gayi thi. Aur Veer uss ladki ko kahi le jaana chaahta tha par ladki ke premi ne virodh kia aur Veer ko ye bilkul bhi pasand na aaya aur wo dono ek dusre se jaa lade. Ye ussi ka parinaam hai Tau jii.

Pranjal ki baat sunte hi Veer ko ek zorrdaar jhatka laga. Usne apni phati aankho se palat ke Pranjal ko ghura toh paaya ki Pranjal bada hi masoom sa chehra banae waha khada hua tha, jese kuch hua hi na ho.

Pranjal : Mene Veer ko samjhaya bhi ki aise maar peet karna bilkul bhi acchi baat nahi hai. Veer ko toh fir bhi kam chot aayi hai. Na jaane Veer ne uss ladke ko kitni buri tarah peeta hoga.

Aisi vaani boliye, mann ka aapa khoye...
Auran ko sheetal kare, aaphu sheetal hoye...

Par Kabir ki ye panktiya iss waqt vyarth thi.

Pranjal ne jo madhur vaani boli thi wo Veer ko sheetal karna toh dur usse itna aag babula kar rahi thi ki yadi uski bas chalti toh wo issi samay Pranjal par toot padta.

Pranjal ki image ghar me ek boht hi sanskaari ladke ki thi, par wo asal me kesa tha ye baat sabhi nahi jaante the.

Brijesh (gusse me) : Tumhari itni himmat Veer!

Manorath : Shaant ho jao! Halla nahi!

Brijesh : Par Papa jii...

Manorath : Ssssshhhhhh!!!

Brijesh : Hmph!

Manorath : Veer! Tumhe pata hai kya kiya hai tumne?

Veer : Nahi! Dada jii... Wo mein...

Manorath : Jo hua so hua. Ab iski charcha koi nahi karega.

Aur sab shaant ho gaye.

Veer ne jab Hall me maujood sabhi logo par nazre firaayi.

Toh uski nazar apne Dada jii ke daayi orr rakhe sofe par gayi jaha uske Dad, Brijesh ke bagal se baithi hui uski sauteli Maa (Step-mom), Shweta usse bauhe sikode hue dekh rahi thi.

Fir uski nazar Shweta ke bagal se baithi hui Shweta ki ekmaatr eklauti beti, Bhumika par gayi. Jo usse dekhte hi apna muh ferr lii.

Jab Veer ne Dada jii ke baayi orr rakhe sofe par nazar daudaayi toh dekha ki uske chacha Karunesh aur unki patni Sumitra yaani ki uski chachi dono hi nazre gadaaye usse hi ghur rahe the.

Sumitra usse bauhe sikode uske chehre ko hi dekh rahi thi.

Unki hi bagal se uske chacha ke bade bete Vivek aur uski patni Ragini bhi baithe hue the. Wo dono bhi usse hi ghur rahe the.

Aur jab Veer ne stairs par nazre daudayi toh dekha ki uske chacha Karunesh ki badi beti Arohi aur choti beti Kavya dono hi saath me cake lete hue neeche aa rahi thi.

Wo dono hi neeche aayi aur cake ko saamne rakhi kaanch ki ek table par rakha aur side wahi sofe par baith gayi.

Jaha Arohi ne usse ek baar dekh ke apni nazre ferr lii, wahi dusri orr Kavya usse aisi haalat me dekh apni bauhe sikode usse badi hi hamdardi se dekh rahi thi par boli kuch nahi.

Kaha ek taraf uske parivaar waale jo naye kapde pehne, sajke baithe hue tha aur kaha wo jo pitne ke baad ekdum geela aur khoon ke nishaan aur ghaavo se bharpoor.

Manorath : Doctor ko dikhwa ke apni dawa karwana mat bhulna.

Veer : J... Jiii

Brijesh (zorr se) : Ab khade khade intezaar kya kar rahe ho? Aage badho aur apne Dada jii ko tohfa do.

Manorath : Aao Veer!

Aur apne Dada jii ki sahuliyat se Veer aage badhte hue apne Dada jii ko gift dene jaane laga.
 
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Update - 3 ~ A Full Fledged Plan

Ab tak...

Brijesh (zorr se) : Ab khade khade intezaar kya kar rahe ho? Aage badho aur apne Dada jii ko tohfa do.

Manorath : Aao Veer!

Aur apne Dada jii ki sahuliyat se Veer aage badhte hue apne Dada jii ko gift dene jaane laga.

Ab aage...

Veer ke Dada jii, Manorath uss par kayi hadd tak bharosa karte the. Kyuki jitni bhi shikaayat wo sunte aa rahe the, unhone aaj tak Veer ko kabhi apni aankho se koi galat kaam karte nahi dekha tha. Aur aaj ye pehli baar nahi tha jab Pranjal ke muh se unhone Veer ki ghatna ke baare me suna tha.

Ye toh saalo se chala aa raha tha. Koi na koi aake Manorath ke saamne Veer ke karmo ki shikaayat karta tha aur Veer keval sar jhukae khada rehta tha. Veer virodh kiya karta tha par uske paas apni baat ko sahi saabit karne ka koi proof nahi rehta tha. Aur isliye ab usne virodh karna bhi chorr diya tha.

Aaj bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Veer ke paas koi saboot nahi tha apni begunaahi saabit karne ka. Aur kya kehta woh? Kon uski baato ka yakeen karta?

Pichle kayi saalo se jo image uski ghar me bani hui thi, uske chalte toh koi uss par reham bhi nahi khaata tha.

Jab Veer apne haatho me wo flower vase lete hue aage badha tabhi achaanak se pata nahi kya hua uska perr fisla aur wo buri tarah saamne ki orr jaa gira.

*Crash*

Flower vase uske haatho se chhuth kar gol ghumte hue ek tezz shor karte hue neeche jaa gira aur ek hi jhatke me wo sundar sa vase dherr saare tukdo me bikhar gaya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaa," Waha baithi mahilae aur ladkiyo ke muh se kuch aisi hi hairaani bhari awaaz nikli.

Aur fir ek shaanti sii chhaa gayi.

Sab ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Sabhi Veer ko aise dekh rahe the jese maano usne kisi ka khoon kar diya ho.

Dekhe bhi kyu na, akhir wo flower vase itna keemti jo tha. Manorath ko shuru se hi paudhe aur flower vases ka boht shauk tha, yahi kaaran tha ki unke ghar me ek alag se garden bhi tha.

Iss waqt Veer ki haalat kharab thi. Usne khud apne Dada jii ke liye ek flower vase chunn ke rakha hua tha jisse wo baad me unhe dene waala tha. Iss vase ke saamne uska vase toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Par ab kya? Ab toh wo vase uske haatho toot chuka tha.

Bas! Brijesh jo apna gussa pehle hi badi mushqil se control kiye hue tha wo uth khada hua aur chillaaya.

Brijesh : Haram khor! Tujhe pata hai wo tohfa kitna mehnga tha?

Apne Dad ki garajti awaaz sunn ek baar fir wo sihar utha. Brijesh usse aag babula hoke khaa jaane wali nazro se ghur raha tha.

Manorath : Brijeesshhhh!!!

Brijesh : Papa jii... Aap... Aap jaante hai ye tohfa kitne ka tha? Ye flower vase 3 lakh ka tha. Mene khud import karwaya tha China se isse aapke liye... Aur iss bewakoof ne...

Vase ki keemat sunte hi waha khade logo ko jese ek bada jhatka laga. 3 lakh unn sabke saamne yu barbaad hoke bikhar ke jo pade hue the.

Sabse zyaada haalat toh Veer ki kharaab thi. Uski samajh nahi aa raha tha wo kare kya.

Brijesh se ab raha na gaya, wo wese hi kayi saalo se Veer se pareshaan tha. Veer uski harr umeedo par paani ferr deta tha.

Veer ki taraf tezz kadmo ke saath jaate hue wo usse ek zorrdaar thappad maarne hi wala tha ki...

Manorath : Brijeessshhh!!

Brijesh : Par Papa jii...

Manorath : Aaj mera janmdin hai. Aur mere janmdin ke din tum aisa suluk karoge toh matlab hi kya. Jo hua usse ek galti maan ke aage badho. Vase kitna hi mehnga kyu na ho, wo toh ab toot chuka hai. Ab uske peeche rone ka koi fayda nahi. Rahi baat paiso ki toh iske paise mein de dunga.

Brijesh : Ye aap kesi baatein kar rahe ho Papa jii? Aapka janmdin hai. Mein bhala aap se paise kyu lunga?

Manorath ki baat sunn Brijesh ne apne haath rok liye par uska gussa abhi tak kam nahi hua tha.

Pranjal : Dada jii, mene Veer se kaha tha baahar hi ki apne shoes utaar de kyuki baarish se geele ho chuke hai. Par Veer ne meri suni hi nahi. Bola ki maids toh ghar me lagi hi hai, wo kis kaam aaengi?

Aur uski baat sunn sabhi ki nazre Veer ke perro par gayi jo geele jute pehna hua tha aur farsh ko ganda kar raha tha.

Aur ye dekh Brijesh aur krodhit ho gaya. Tabhi Veer ki stepmom Shweta uth khadi huyi.

Shweta : Veer din ba din laaparwaah hota jaa raha hai.

Pranjal : Veer! Apne jute utaaro, idhar aao ye sleepers pehn lo aur ab galti ho gayi toh ho gayi. Ye dekho bhagwaan ka prasaad rakha hua hai. Dada jii ko ye prasaad do aur unse maafi maang lo.

Pranjal usse haath pakad ke uske jute utarwaata hai aur usse wahi Dada jii ke paas rakhi ek sleepers ko pehna deta hai. Pranjal ne wahi table pe rakhe hue dahi shakkar jo ki bhagwaan ko chadhaaya gaya tha usse katori me laake Veer ko thama diya.

Pranjal : Jao Veer! Dada jii ko prasaad do aur maafi maango.

Veer bechaara itna seham gaya tha aaj ki ghatnao se. Aaj uski zindagi ka sabse manhoos aur bura din tha.

Veer ne prasaad ki katori haath me thaami aur wo aage badha hi tha ki firse uska perr na jaane kese fisla aur prasaad ki katori uske haath se chhatak kar seedhe uske Dada jii ki orr jaa giri.

Aur saara ka saara prasaad uske Dada jii ke kapdo par jaa gira.

Bas! Brijesh ka jo gussa abhi apni limit par tha, wo cross ho gaya. Wo aage badha aur...

*Chataak* *Chataak* *Chataak*

Thappado ki jhadi laga dii aur Veer ke gaalo par raseed raseed ke maarte gaya.

Thappado ki goonj se Kavya sehamte hue sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Usse waqai Veer pe taras aa raha tha. Arohi bhi bauhe sikodti hui saamne ho rahe drashya ko dekh rahi thi.

Wahi Pranjal aur Vivek khushi se fule nahi sama rahe the.

Vivek (khuspusaate hue) : Yahi hai wo grand show... Haha!

Ragini : Ohhh! Toh tum iski baat kar rahe the. Par... Par ye kuch zyaada nahi ho gaya?

Vivek : Hmph! Zyaada kaha ye toh abhi bhi kam hai.

Ragini : Aur ye idea kis ka tha?

Vivek (smiles) : Chote ka...

Ragini (hairaani me) : Pranjal ka??? Devar jii kuch zyaada hi chatur ho rahe hai aaj kal...

Idhar thappado se Veer ke gaal laal ho chale the.

Brijesh (gusse me) : Tu jaanta hai aaj tune kya kiya hai? Haram khor!!! Wo prasaad hamaare kul ki devi ka tha. Aur tune usse zameen pe gira diya? Aur wo bhi Papa jii ke upar? Naye kapde bhi kharaab kar diye tune unke... 3 lakh ke tohfe ka chuna laga diya... Roz roz tere haath se kuch na kuch gadbad hoti hi hai. Beta nahi panauti hai tu... Mein kehta hu nikal jaa... Nikal jaa issi waqt ghar se... Aur ahinda se iss ghar me qadam bhi mat rakhna...

Aur Brijesh usko haatho se pakad ke ghaseet ke baahar le gaya aur zorr se dhakka dete hue usse darwaaze ke baahar fek diya.

Ghar me maujood sabhi log darwaaze ki orr tezz kadmo ke saath aae siwae Manorath ke...

Aaj tak Devi ke prasaad ka aisa apmaan unke kul me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya tha. Manorath khud abhi iss waqt atyant dukh aur gusse me tha. Issi kaaran usne Brijesh ko bhi iss baar nahi toka.

Aur wo wahi baitha hua chup chaap apne hi mann me Devi se shama maangne laga.

Brijesh : Nikal jaa! Nikal jaa iss ghar se... Aaj se tera aur mera koi sambandh nahi. Marr gaya aaj se tu mere liye... Mera koi beta nahi hai. Khabardaar yadi tune iss ghar me dubaara kadam bhi rakha toh...

Veer kaapte hue sab kuch apni aankho se dekh raha tha, ye pal bhar me kya se kya ho gaya. Aaj kyu uske saath ye sab hua?

Veer ki sauteli Maa, Shweta saamne ke nazaare ko badi hi khushi se dekh rahi thi. Uski mann ki muraad poori jo ho gayi thi. Ab uski beti hi jaydaad ki maalkin banegi. Yahi sochte hue wo apni beti ki orr mudi toh dekha ki uski beti, Bhumika ke chehre par koi expression nahi the. Aur ye jaan kar Shweta ko khushi hui. Ki uski beti ke mann me bhi Veer ke prati koi bhaav nahi hai.

Veer ke aasu uski aankho se lagataar bahe jaa rahe the. Par wo kuch nahi bola.

Wo chup chaap utha aur baahar ki orr chal diya. Usne apne jeb me se gaadi ki chaavi nikaali aur wo gaadi on karne hi waala tha ki peeche se Brijesh ki awaaz aayi.

Brijesh : Ye gaadi teri nahi hai...

Aur Veer chaavi ko gaadi me lage hi chorr kar ghar se baahar nikal aaya.

Usne ek jhalak peeche mud ke dekha. Shweta aur Bhumika usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahi thi. Brijesh ki aankho me bhayaanak gussa nazar aa raha tha. Wahi uske Karunesh chacha bhi usse bina koi bhaav ke dekh rahe the.

Uski Sumitra chachi thoda chintit zaroor prateet ho rahi thi.

Vivek aur Pranjal ke chehro par halki khushi nazar aa rahi thi. Ragini aur Arohi bauhe sikode jese kisi soch me doobi hui thi. Jab uski nazar Kavya par gayi toh Kavya ne sehamte hue sar jhuka liya.

Bas! Uske baad Veer palat ke ghar se dur jaane laga. Ghar ke security guards bhi Veer ko jaata hua dekh rahe the.

Achanak baadal garje aur baarish firse shuru ho gayi.

Par Veer na ruka. Aur kuch hi palo me wo apne gharwaalo ki nazro se ojhal ho chuka tha.

Iss waqt Veer ko baarish acchi lag rahi thi. Usse apni lag rahi thi. Jab Ajay se maar khaate waqt wo ghar laut raha tha tab bhi baarish ne uska saath diya tha. Aur abhi jaha uske ghar waalo ne usse ghar se nikaal ke usse akela chhorr diya tab bhi baarish uska saath de rahi thi.

Uske saath saath mausam bhi yu ro raha tha. Veer bina koi awaaz kiye rote rote bas chalta jaa raha tha.

Usne apne seene par latka pendant apne haatho me thaam liya. Ek bada hi pyaara sa pendant tha, ekdum alag type ka.

Usse bheenchte hue Veer ke aasu aur tezzi se behne lage. Ye woh pendant tha jo uski asli Maa ne usse pehnaaya tha.

Veer ko apni asli Maa ke baare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha. Bas itna pata tha ki uss Maa ne usse janm diya hai. Jab bhi wo Brijesh se apni Maa ke baare me puchta tha toh Brijesh bas ek hi baat bolta~ "Naam mat lo uss kameeni aurat ka..."

Uski Maa ka naam tha Bhawana. Veer ke janm ke ek saal baad hi dono ke beech talaak ho gaya aur Bhawana ghar se chali gayi thi.

Kaha gayi woh, kis haal me hogi abhi, zinda bhi hai ya nahi uski Maa usse kuch nahi pata tha. Yaha tak ki uski Maa ka naam bhi uske Dada jii ne usse bataya tha. Na hi uss aurat ko lekar ghar me charcha hoti thi na hi koi uske baare me koi topic chedhta tha.

Veer ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki uski Maa kesi dikhti thi. Koi bhi photo album nahi tha, uski Maa se judi koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me.

Baarish ke kaaran sadko par abhi gaadiya bhi kam chalti hui nazar aa rahi thi. Usse nahi pata tha wo kaha jaa raha hai. Jab tak uske perr chal rahe the wo bas chalta jaa raha tha. Usse apni sagi Maa ki yaad aane lagi. Yadi wo yaha hoti abhi toh uski Maa uske saath kesa vyavhaar karti? Kya usse pyaar deti? Ya fir Brijesh ki hi tarah wo bhi...!?

Paani se bheega hua Veer main road par aa chuka tha, abhi wo mudne hi waala tha ki ekdum se ek car mod se aayi aur Veer ne palat ke car ko dekha.

Par tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi.

Car ka agla hissa uski pasli se takraaya aur thokar hote hi wo zorr se jaate hue dur gir pada.

"Ohhhh! Noooo...." Car me baithe ek aadmi ke muh se nikla.

Car ko jhatka lagte hi peeche baithi ek ladki forun hi aage ki seat se jaa bhidi, "Aaaahhhh!"

Aadmi : Madam aap theek toh hai na?

Ladki (sar malte hue) : Haa! Mein... Mein thik hu.

Fir jese hi uss ladki ne saamne dekha toh uski maano saasein hi atak gayi. Saamne ek ladka zameen par dala hua tha aur usse samajhne me derr na lagi ki abhi abhi uski car kis se takraayi thi.

Wo ladka waha baarish me car se bhid ke pada bheeg raha tha.

Ladki (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye....

Aadmi : Inn sab ka samay nahi hai Madam. Hume jald hi nikalna hoga.

Aur itna bol wo aadmi forun hi gaadi aage badhaane lagta hai.

Ladki (chillaate hue) : Ye kya bol rahe ho aap? Nahi... Hum aise usse chorr kar nahi jaa sakte...

Aadmi : Madam! Baat ko samajhiye... Iss waqt humaara yaha se nikalna boht zaroori hai.

Aur usne car ke accelerator par perr rakh car aage badha dii.

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.
 
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Update - 4 ~ In the Hospital

Ab tak...

Ladki peeche mud window se uss ladke ko dekh rahi thi, uska nichla honth daato tale zorr se daba hua tha ki maano khoon hi nikal aae. Aankho me halke aasu bhi aa chuke the.

"I'm sorry..." Usne mann me kaha.

Aur wo car palak jhapakte hi logo ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.

Idhar accident dekh aas paas ke jo bhi log dukaan ke neeche baarish se bachne ke liye khade hue the wo daudte hue aae aur Veer ko uthaane lage.

Ab aage...

"Arre... Arre... Uthao... Uthao..."
"Jaldi... Jaldi..."
"Car wala madarchod bhaag gaya..."
"Uthwao bhailog..."

Aur waha maujood log forun hi Veer ke paas aake usse uthaane lage. Bina baarish ki parvaah kiye.
Yadi uske parivaar waale hote toh kya woh usse iss waqt uthaate?

Shayad haa? Ya shayad nahi!?

"Arre isse toh boht zyaada chot aayi hai, khoon beh raha hai kaafi, jaldi ambulance ko call karo koi..."

Waha khade ek aadmi ne chillaaya toh agle ne forun hi 108 dial karte hue ambulance bulwa lii.

Abhi wo log savdhaani se Veer ko utha hi rahe the ki itne me ussi mod se ek aur car aayi par bheed ke kaaran uss car ko rukna pada.

Car waale ne jab horn maari toh usse itni gaaliya padi ki usse na chaahte hue bhi rukna pada.

"Dhatttt behanchod!! Iski maa ki aankh..." Car waale ne steering pe zorr se haath maarte hue chillaaya.

Dusra aadmi : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta... Car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Boss ko pata chala toh woh hamaari gardan na udaa de...

Dusra aadmi : Mein Boss ko samjha dunga... Tum car ghuma lo...

Pehla aadmi : Thik hai.

Aur wo car reverse karke waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar log Veer ko utha ke ek shop ke neeche lita ke uski choto par rumaal ya kapda baandh ke jese tese khoon rokne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Kuch derr me hi ambulance aayi aur Veer ko leke hospital ki orr chali gayi.

***

Veer ke ghar me...

Sabhi log iss waqt Manorath ke kamre me maujood the. Manorath apne bistar par baitha hua tha toh wahi baaki sabhi khade hue usse hi dekh rahe the.

Manorath : Aaj tak prasaad ka aisa apmaan hamaare ghar me kisi ne bhi nahi kiya.

Pranjal : Dada jii! Veer ko waqai aisa nahi karna tha.

Kavya : Par... Dada jii! Wo toh... Unhone jaan bujh ke nahi kiya hoga...

Pranjal : Kavya? Ye tum kya keh rahi ho? Pehli baar maante hai ki uska perr fisal gaya aur wo vase toot gaya par dusri baar bhi?

Pranjal ki baat sunn bechaari Kavya kuch virodh hi na kar paayi aur sar jhuka lii.

Sumitra : Jeth jii... Aapko aise... Veer ko ghar se nahi nikaalna tha.

Brijesh : Mene jo bhi kiya hai boht soch samajh ke kiya hai. Mein ye kadam pehle hi uthaane waala tha par hamesha Papa jii ke kaaran ruk jaata tha. Lekin aaj toh usne hadd hi paar kar dii. Akhir uss kameeni ki kokh se jo paida hua hai, aisa hi hona tha... Mere toh ek bhi gud nahi hai usme...

Manorath : Wo jaisa bhi hai iss parivar ka hissa hai. Usse jaake wapas le aao. Abhi zyada dur nahi gaya hoga.

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi Papa jii. Mene aapko pehle bhi bol ke rakha hai. Ki jis din ye apni hadd paar karega uss din mein isse ghar se nikaal dunga. Aur aaj yahi hua hai... Ab mein usse iss ghar me ghusne tak nahi dunga... Aap apna faisla sunaaiye Papa jii...

Manorath : Toh tum log usse wapas nahi laoge?

Brijesh : Bilkul bhi nahi...

Manorath : Toh fir mera bhi yahi faisla hai. Zameen aur jaydaad kisko milegi ye bhi tab hi nirnay hoga jab parivaar ka harr ek sadasya ghar me maujood hoga.

Brijesh : Papa jii!??

Vivek : Dada jii!? Ye aap...!?

Manorath ke faisle se maano sabko ek jhatka sa laga. Jiss pal ke liye wo sabhi bekaraar the ki akhir kisko zameen aur jaydaad dii jaegi wo pal toh aaya hi nahi. Ulta ab jab tak ghar me Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak faisla tal chuka tha.

Manorath ke paas dherr saari zameen thi jiski keemat crores me thi aur jaydaad bhi. Aur ye sab kuch ghar ke ussi sadasya ko milne waala tha jo Manorath ki aankho me iske liye sahi tha.

Uske 2 petrol pump bhi rahe jo usne apne beto ko de diye the. Ek petrol pump ka maalik jaha Brijesh tha toh wahi dusre ka maalik Karunesh.

Karunesh ne dimaag se paisa kamaate hue apne bete Vivek ki upar lagaya aur aaj Vivek ki khud ki ek automobiles ki company thi. Bhale hi worldwide nahi thi abhi par uska business zorro shoro se chal raha tha.

Karunesh ki badi beti Arohi aur choti beti Kavya, Veer ke hi college me thi aur wo dono bhi B.Tech kar rahi thi. Jaha Arohi aur Veer ki branch same thi ~ IT.

Wahi Kavya CS branch se belong karti thi.

Pranjal bhi same college me tha par wo B.com kar raha tha. Uski building alag thi par saari buildings saath me hi thi, jis kaaran wo break ke time Arohi aur Kavya se milne jaata rehta tha.

Karunesh ko apne bete betiyo ki koi chinta nahi thi.

Par Brijesh ka aisa nahi tha. Brijesh ko bhi ek petrol pump diya gaya tha Manorath dwaara. Usne bhi dimaag se apni ek luxury hotel khulwaayi jo sheher me kaafi mashoor thi. Jaha wo petrol pump sambhaalta tha toh wahi uski hotel uski dusri patni Shweta sambhaalti thi.

Shweta ke hi saath uski beti, Bhumika bhi uska saath deti thi.

Aur aaj yahi faisla liya jaane wala tha ki kisko zameen aur jaydaad milegi.

Par sab kuch dhara ka dhara reh gaya.

Manorath : Mera faisla saaf hai. Jao aur mujhe akela chorr do abhi.

Vivek : Par Dada jii...

Manorath : Mene kaha jao... Aur Brijesh... Yadi tum Veer ko wapas nahi laane waale toh mujhe uske baare me harr cheez batao... Iss waqt kaha hai woh... Kiske ghar theher raha hai? Wo mera pota hai. Mein jaan'na chaahta hu wo sahi salaamat hai ya nahi?

Brijesh : Thik...

Aur ghar ke mukhiya ki awaaz sunn sabhi bemann waha se nikal gaye.

Idhar kamre me aate hi Vivek Pranjal pe toot pada.

Vivek : Chote ye kya kar diya tune? Ye daav toh ulta hi pad gaya. Dada jii ne toh faisla hi taal diya. Ab jab tak wo Veer nahi aa jaata tab tak Dada jii koi faisla nahi sunaenge.

Pranjal : Bhaiya! Ab mujhe kya pata tha aisa ho jaega? Mene toh yahi socha tha aaj Veer ko Dada ji ki nazro me gira dunga toh Dada jii uska naam lenge hi nahi. Par mujhe nahi pata tha Tau jii usse ghar se baahar hi nikaal denge.

Ragini : Mene kaha tha ye kuch zyada hi ho gaya hai.

Pranjal : Aap log tension mat lo. Hum log kese bhi karke Dada jii ko mana lenge aur wo jald hi faisla le lenge. Filhaal ek musibat toh gayi.

Vivek : Hmm!! Par chote tune wo sab kiya kese?

Vivek ke sawaal karne par Pranjal ne muskuraate hue jeb se kuch nikaala aur unn dono ko dikhaya.

Pranjal : Haha! Bhaiya! Saara kamaal iska hai.

Vivek (hairaani me) : Ye toh... Ye toh... Ye toh tufoil hai chote...

Pranjal : Haha! Haa bhaiya! Aapke hi yaha se laaya hu.

Tufoil ek aisa slippery oil jisse automobiles me use kiya jaata hai. Na keval ye automobiles ke liye balki ye apni slipness ke liye bhi jaana jaata hai.

Pranjal : Ye mene floor par daal diya tha. Aur mein Veer ko wahi se le gaya jaha ye oil mene daala tha. Bas! Fir kya tha, uska geela joota jese hi uspe pada, Veer fisla aur vase seedha neeche... Hahaha!

Ragini : Par wo prasaad ka kya?

Pranjal : Bhabhi! Wo bhi iska hi kamaal hai. Mene sleepers ke neeche bhi isse laga ke rakha hua tha.

Ragini (smiles) : Waah! Maan gaye tumhe bhi. Par wo chot ka kya jo Veer ko pehle se hi lagi hui thi?

Pranjal : Wo bhi mere kehne par hau tha Bhabhi. Mere kayi chelo me se ek hai wo Ajay. Mene usko keh ke rakha tha ki aaj pehla din hai toh koi bhi bahana bana ke aaj jamm ke thukaayi kar dena uss Veer ki... Aur usne yahi kiya hahahaha!

Vivek : Par chote, wo oil zameen par nazar kyu nahi aaya?

Pranjal : Kese aaega Bhaiya? Mene usse carpet ke ekdum bagal se giraaya tha hahaha!

Aur uske saath hi Vivek bhi hassne laga. Ragini muskuraate hue dono ko dekh rahi thi. Jaha ye jashn mana rahe the toh wahi koi aur tha jo iss waqt apni saaso se ladd raha tha.

***

Hospital...

Nurse : Iski haalat boht critical hai Doctor.

Doctor : I know... Humse jo bann padega hum karenge.

Nurse : Jii! But iski family...!? Iska mobile toh kaam hi nahi kar raha hai.

Doctor : Mene ward boy ko bola hai wo iske phone ki SIM apne phone me daalke iske ghar waalo ko call karega.

Nurse : Hmm!!

Aur Veer ka treatment shuru ho chuka tha.

Ward boy ne jab Veer ki SIM daal ke Brijesh ko call kiya toh Brijesh ne ye soch ke call nahi uthaya ki zaroor Veer ne paise maangne ke liye phone kiya hoga aur gusse me usne apna phone hi band kar diya.

Ward boy ne jab Sumitra ko call kiya toh call lag hi nahi raha tha. Kese lagta? Pranjal ne apni maa ke phone me Veer ka number block jo kar ke rakha tha.

Fir usne akhiri number jo ki Kavya ka tha usse call kiya.

Idhar iss waqt Kavya Arohi aur Pranjal ke saath hi baithi hui thi. Number dekhte hi Kavya soch me pad gayi.

'Veer Bhaiya mujhe kyu call kar rahe hai?? Phone utha lu? Thik hai utha leti hu.'

Par iske pehle ki wo phone utha paati, Pranjal ne uska phone chhina liya.

Pranjal : Zara dekho toh... Veer ab hamari Kavya ko phone laga raha hai. Kyu Kavya?

Kavya : Phone dijiye Bhaiya.

Pranjal : Nahi! Zaroor ab apni pyari behan se paise maangne ke liye phone kar raha hoga. Kyuki baahar ab usse paiso ki zaroorat toh padegi hi...

Aur usne forun hi phone kaat ke uska number hi block kar diya.

Pranjal : Ab tumhe disturbance nahi hoga behan hahaha!

Kavya : Hmm?

Pranjal : Accha wo sab chorro, chalo hum sab pizza mangwaate hai.

Kavya : Mera mann nahi hai Bhaiya aap hi khao. Aaj Veer Bhaiya ke saath itna sab kuch ho gaya aur aapko pizza ki padi hai?

Pranjal : Arre ye kya baat hui yaar. Kavya tum ab bhi usse apna bhai maanti ho? Wo bhai kehne laayak nahi hai Kavya. Kherr chorro! Arohi didi aap toh khaogi na?

Arohi : Nahi!

Pranjal : Thik hai toh mein hi mangwa leta hu...

Aur wo waha se chala jaata hai.

Kavya apna phone liye sochti rehti hai ki akhir Veer ne usse kyu call lagaya hoga. Wo sochti hai ki agli baar yadi phone aaya toh woh zaroor uthaegi. Par usse kya pata tha ki Pranjal ne Veer ka number hi block kar diya tha.

***

Idhar hospital me ek ward me ek ladki apni Maa ke paas baithi hui thi...

Ladki : Maa! Ab mein chalti hu... Tum dhyaan rakhna theek!

Aurat : Haa beta! Mujhe kya... Tumhaare Papa toh rahenge hi na mere saath. Ab tum jao... Raat ho rahi hai beta. Aur fir, Juhi akeli pados me zyada derr nahi reh paegi. Jaa beta...

Ladki : Jii Maa! Chalti hu. Tum dhyaan rakhna apna haa!? Koi bhi dikkat ho toh...

Aurat : Arre baba! Haa! Pata hai mujhe... Jaa ab tu...

Ladki : Thik!

Aur ladki apni Maa ke ward se baahar nikal aati hai.

Abhi wo aage badh ke nikalne hi wali thi ki usne dekha ki uski Maa ke bagal waale ward ke baahar doctor aur ward boy ke beech behas ho rahi thi jisse dekh wo rukk gayi.

Doctor : Dekho kese bhi karke iske parivaar walo ko inform karo.... Kese bhi karke...

Ward boy : Arre Sir! Kisi ne phone hi nahi uthaaya...

Doctor : Haa toh lagaate raho... Nahi toh fir police ko inform karo kyuki uske shareer pe maar peet ke bhi nishaan hai.

Inn dono ki behas chal rahi thi ki tabhi wo ladki jigyaasa purvak aage badhi aur usne ward me jhaank ke dekha, jab usne patient ka chehra dekha toh ekdum hi chaunk gayi aur uske muh se tezz swar me nikla, "Veeeeeeerr!????"

Doctor (palat'te hue) : Aap? Aap janti hai isse?

Ladki : Huh? Mein... Haa! Wo mera student hai. Mein usse pichle ek saal se jaanti hu.

Doctor : Bhagwaan ka shuqr hai chalo koi toh mila... Aapka shubh naam?

Ladki : Nidhi...

Doctor : Okay toh Nidhi jii... Aap idhar aaiye zara mere saath.

Kuch derr baad...

Nidhi Veer ke college me Maths padhaati thi. Aur iss saal wo Veer ki hi class ki classteacher thi.

Wo Veer ko jaanti bhi thi. Bhale hi Veer padhne me hoshiyaar nahi tha par Veer sabse shaant baccha tha uski class me. Aur ho bhi kyu na? Uske dost hi nahi the.

Aaj Nidhi apni Maa jinhe kal hi achanak minor heart attack aa gaya tha unhe hi dekhne ke liye hospital me aayi hui thi. Par ittefaaq se usse Veer bhi yahi mil gaya.

Veer ke liye saari kaagzi kaam Nidhi ne kiya aur yaha tak ki apne Pita jii se Nidhi ne Veer ke liye medical fees bhi advanced me kuch jama karwane ko keh diya.

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki Nidhi ki khud samajh me nahi aaya. Aur iss waqt wo ward ke darwaaze ki window glass se jhaakte hue Veer ko dekh rahi thi aur soch me padi hui thi.

'Ye achanak... Ye Veer haadse me kese...!? Aur iske Maa Baap phone kyu nahi utha rahe hai!? Kese Maa Baap hai? Mujhe kal jaake unse baat karni padegi.'

Nidhi ye soch hospital se nikal gayi.

Par uske jaate Veer ki haalat bigadna shuru ho gayi thi.

Nurse : Doctor...

Doctor : I know...

*Beep Beep Beep*

Uski heart beat bilkul band hone ki kagaar par aa chuki thi.

Ki tabhi achaanak se aisa kuch hua jiske chalte uski heartbeat waapas se normal ho gayi.

Doctor : Phew... He's out of danger now.

Aur kuch derr baad hi Doctors aur nurse Veer ki haalat stable roop me chorr ke baahar aa gaye.

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]
 
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Update - 5 ~ System Activation

Ab tak...

Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...

Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...

Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...

Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...

Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...

[System has been activated.]

Ab aage...

Veer ke accident ke kuch ghanto baad hi jab Brijesh ka phone baja tha aur screen par Veer naam jab usne dekha tha toh pata nahi kyu Brijesh ne call nahi uthaaya.

Shayad kuch derr pehle usne khud hi apne bete ko dhakke maar ke ghar se baahar nikaala tha iss kaaran vash? Ya fir wo abhi Veer ke muh se koi bhi baat nahi sunn'na chaahta tha. Kuch tha jo usse rok raha tha Veer se baat karne ke liye.

Ki tabhi uske phone par firse call aaya par ye uske khud ke vyakti ka tha.

Brijesh : Hello?

Aadmi : Saahab! Veer jii ka car se accident hua hai. Abhi wo xxxxxxxxxx hospital me bharti hai.

Aur ye sunte hi Brijesh uth khada hua. Aur forun hi hospital ke liye jaane laga.

***

Agle din Kavya college me apni soch me ghum thi.

'Veer bhaiya ka call uske baad se aaya hi nahi. Kya karu? Call back karu? Iske pehle unhone kabhi mujhe call nahi kiya fir achanak kal kyu? Kahi koi dikkat toh nahi? Kal unke beech mein call na kar saki thi...'

Aur ye soch wo call lagaati hai par call nahi laga. Kese lagta? Ward boy ne Veer ki SIM waapas se uske phone me jo daal dii thi.

Ant me Kavya uske whtsapp par message daal deti hai ye puchne ki wo theek hai ya nahi?

Idhar Nidhi din me hi Veer ke ghar gayi thi taaki wo jaan sake ki kyu uske Maa Baap ne call nahi uthaaya tha.

Jab wo waha pohuchi aur jesa ravaiyaa usne dekha Brijesh, Shweta aur baaki ghar waalo ka Veer ke prati ye dekh ke usse itna gussa aaya ki wo khud ko control na kar saki.

Nidhi ek Maa bhi thi. Uski khud ki beti abhi choti thi aur aise me wo jaanti thi ki ek parent hona kya hota hai. Aise me jab usne Brijesh aur Shweta ka behaviour dekha toh bas wo bhadak uthi.

Nidhi : Kese Maa Baap ho aap log? Aapka Beta waha apni zindagi se ladd raha hai aur aap logo ko koi chinta hi nahi hai? Yaha tak ki aapne usse apne ghar se baahar hi nikaal diya!?

Brijesh : Dekhiye Madam! Veer ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi hai. Rahi baat paise ki toh uske medical kharcho ki bharpayi mein kar chuka hu par iske baad ab wo jaane ki wo kaha rahega kese rahega... Aur aap hamare parivaarik maamlo se dur rahe toh hi accha hoga.

Nidhi : Bhul se bhi aise Maa Baap na de bhagwaan kisi ko...

Aur Nidhi apni namm aankhe liye waha se bhaag aayi. Usse Veer ke liye waqai boht bura lag raha tha. Kaha wo khud ko badqismat samajhti thi par ab Veer ko dekh usse mehsoos hua ki kam se kam usse Maa Baap ka pyaar toh mil raha tha par Veer ko toh wo bhi nahi mila...

Na jaane kya kya saha hoga uss bechaare ne ab tak?

Na jaane kese kese din bitaaye honge Veer ne unke beech rehke?

Idhar hospital me abhi shaam ke waqt Veer ko hosh aa chuka tha.

"Arrrghhh!" Ek karaah ke saath uski aankh khuli.

Aankho se dhundhlapan hata, saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Usne dekha ki wo hospital me hai. Aankhein uski jal rahi thi. Usse sab kuch jese yaad aane laga...

Kya hua tha?

Haan! Aur kal ki saari vardaat flashback ki tarah uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.

Aur usne apna sar pakad liya...

Aankho se aasu behne lage...

Abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki itne me uske andar ek awaaz gunji jiske chalte uske raungte khade ho gaye.

[Sytem has been activated. You are now the owner of the system.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Huh? Kaun? Kaun hai?

Awaaz se maano Veer bechaara darr hi gaya. Usne apna sar idhar udhar hilaate hue dekha par wo awaaz kaha se aayi usse kuch bhi pata na chala.

[Name the System!!]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Mein puchta hu kaun hai?

Aur firse ek awaaz uske dimaag me gunji...

[Analyzing Hindi language from owner's mind...

Processing...

Process completed.

Hindi Language has been recognised.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Saamne aao... Kiski awaaz hai ye jo mere sarr me gunj rahi hai...!?

Tabhi wahi awaaz firse uske mann me gunji...

Par iss baar uske bol alag bhaasha me the.

[Shaant! Mein System hu. Aur ab se tum mere master ho.]

Veer (darrte hue) : Kaun bol raha hai? Mujhe tum dikhayi kyu nahi de rahe?

[Mene kaha na Shaant! Mein ek system hu. Meri koi physical body nahi hai. Mein tumhare andar hu.]

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Me... Mere andar?

[Haa! Kya tumhe yaad hai kal tumhare saath kya hua tha? Tumhara accident hua tha. Aur tum marrte marrte bache ho tumhe pata hai? Yadi mene samay par madad na ki hoti toh tum zinda nahi bachte.]

Veer (chillaate hue) : Kesi madad? Tum mere andar kese ho? Baahar aao...

[Arre! Itni zorr se mat chillao. Andar mann me hi kaho jo kuch bhi kehna hai. Mein tumhaare mann, dil, dimag sab se judd chuki hu. Aur tumhare mann ki baat sunn sakti hu. Aise chillaoge toh log tumhe pagal samjhenge.]

Aur uss vichitr mann ki awaaz sunn Veer apne mann me hi baat karne laga.

Veer : Meri... Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Ye sab kya chal raha hai?

[I know! Abhi tumhe samajhne me time lagega. Bas itna samajh lo ki mein tumhe koi nuksaan nahi pohuchaane wali. Ulta mein tumhari madad ke liye yaha hu.]

Veer : Meri madad?

Veer ne kaapte hue pucha.

[Haa! Tumhari madad! Mein tumhari madad karungi. Hamesha tum apni kismat ko koste the na? Ab mein tumhara saath dungi aur tum apni kismat palat ke rakh doge.]

Veer : Wo... Wo kaise?

[Yahi toh mera kaam hai. Yadi mera istemaal sahi se kiya. Toh tum duniya par raaj kar sakte ho.]

Veer : Sach!?

[Ekdum sach.]

Veer : Toh kya tum ladki ho? Kyuki tumhari awaaz ladkiyo jesi hai.

[Nahi! Mein na hi ladki hu na hi ladka. Mein kisi bhi gender me apne aap ko dhaal sakti hu. Mene tumhaare mann me jhaank ke dekha toh pata chala tumhe ladkiya zyada pasand hai ladko ke muqaable isliye mene apni awaaz ladki ki rakhi hui hai.]

Veer (blush) : Huh? Obviously Mujhe ladkiya pasand hai. Ladke nahi. I'm not gay...

[Yadi kaho toh awaaz ladke ki rakh lu!?]

Veer : Huh? Nahi! Nahi! Aise hi theek hai.

[Hehehe~]

Veer : ..........

[Accha! Ab apni aankhein band karo aur mann me hi kaho ~ Status]

Veer (aankhein band karte hue) : Status!

Aur Veer ke itna kehte hi uske mann me ek window khul gayi,

[ Name - Veer
Age - 20
Status - Abandoned student.

Stats :
Strength - 3/100
Intelligence - 4/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 6/100

Talents - 0
Points - 0 ]

Ye sab dekh ke Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye.

[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]

Veer : Udaa lo... Tum bhi mera mazaak uda lo... Ab toh mujhe aadat pad gayi hai.

[Hey! Hey! Sorry! But ab tension mat lo. Mein hu na. Mein tumhe dekhna kaha se kaha pohucha dungi.]

Veer : Aur tum aisa kyu karogi? Kya milega tumhe aisa karke?

[Mera kaam hi yahi hai. Mera kaam hai logo ko sabse sarvashreshth banaana.]

Veer : Toh tumne mujhe hi kyu chuna?

[Mene chuna nahi. Jab mein yaha se guzri toh tum hi paas me the aur mein tumhare shareer me pravesh kar gayi. Apne aap ko Lucky keh sakte ho tum.]

Veer (shocked) : Yaha se guzri matlab?

[Uss baare me mein zyaada baat nahi kar sakti.]

Veer : Toh? Toh Doctor ko pata nahi chala? Ki tum mere andar ho?

[Hahaha~ Doctor kya... Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]

Aur ek aur jhatka Veer ko. Ye kya bala ghuss gayi achanak se uske andar aake?

Veer : Aur tumhe Hindi kese aati hai??

[Arre buddhu abhi toh bataya, mein tumhare mann, dimaag aur dil se jud chuki hu. Aur abhi abhi toh seekhi tumhaare dimaag se hi. Isliye jitni Hindi tumhe aati hai utni hi mujhe bhi.]

Veer : O... Okay!

[Par tumhaare stats boht hi bekaar hai. Mujhe khud taras aa raha hai dekh ke. Tumhe jald se jald apne stats badhaane honge.]

Veer : Ye? Ye stats kya hai?

[Ye tumhari asli shamtaaye hai. Tumhari strength 3 hai yaani ki jo taaqat hai tumhare andar usse yadi number se darshaaya jae toh woh 3 hai. Intelligence matlab tumhari buddhi, agility tumhari furti, endurance tumhari sehan-sheelta aur appearance tumhare physical features yaani ki chehra body haath perr ye sab.]

Veer : Aur mein inhe badha sakta hu? Toh mere asli shareer me badlaav aaenge?

[Haa!]

Veer (shocked) : Baap re! Aise me toh mein fir...

[Tabhi toh kaha ki ab mein tumhari kismat palat ke rakh dungi.]

Veer : Par wo points kese badhenge?

[Missions karke. Samay samay par tumhe missions milenge aur jese jese tum unhe complete karoge tumhe points milenge. Unn points se tum apne stats badha paoge aur saath hi saath nayi skills khareed paoge. Saath hi saath jitni uplabdhiya aur naam kamaoge tumhe points milte rahenge.]

Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi...

[Hmm! Tumhara intelligence kam hai na isliye abhi sab kuch tumhare bheje ke upar se jaega. Bas itna samajh lo. Jese jese tum missions poore karte jaoge, mera level aur saath hi saath tumhaara level badhta jaega. Jiske chalte aur bhi anokhi skills unlock hoti jaengi. Dhyaan rahe! Yadi mission ko time limit me poora nahi kiya gaya. Toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhe kho doge.]

Veer : O... Okay!!

[Hmm! Ek aur akhiri baat. Kabhi bhi... Kabhi bhi ghamand mat karna. Jis din tumhe ghamand aana shuru hua, uss din se hi tumhara ant bhi shuru ho jaega.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Apna thook nigalte hue usne firse kaha.

Veer : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai.

[Duniya me aisi koi cheez nahi hai. Saari duniya me mein hi ek hu jo tumhare andar iss waqt maujood hu. Mein iss planet se nahi hu. Aur planet ke baahar kesi kesi cheeze maujood hai ye tum insaan soch bhi nahi sakte.]

Veer : .........

Iske pehle ki Veer kuch aage keh paata, Nidhi uske ward me aa gayi.

Darwaaze ki aahat se jab Veer ne palat ke dekha toh apni ma'am ko dekh kar chaunk gaya.

Veer : Ma'am!?

Nidhi : Ohh God!! Finally... Tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath aage aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam lii...

Veer (shocked) : Nidhi Ma'am aap yaha!?

Nidhi ne fir saari baat usse bata dii. Jab usse pata chala ki Brijesh ne uska call nahi uthaaya tha toh uske chehre par dard bhari muskuraahat aa gayi. Nidhi usse bechain bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.

Veer : Aapne mere liye medical fees dii!?

Nidhi : Mene toh sirf advance diya tha baad me tumhaare Dad ne saari pay kii.

Kehte hue usne Veer ka haath ek baar fir thaam liya.

Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Tumhe... Tumhe bura lag raha hoga na? Tumhare Maa Baap tumhe dekhne tak nahi aaye. Jese maano unhe koi parvaah hi nahi hai tumhari.

Veer (smiles) : Isme koi nayi baat nahi hai Ma'am. Ye sab toh roz ka hai. I'm not surprised. Haha~

Uski wo fake hassi dekh pata nahi kyu, par Nidhi ko apne dil me atyant hi dard mehsoos hua. Aur usne Veer ka haath aur zorr se bheench liya.

Tabhi Veer ke andar firse awaaz gunji,

[Apne mann me kaho 'Check' aur fir iss aurat ki taraf dekho.]

System ki baat sunn Veer ne wesa hi kiya aur jese hi usne check kehte hue Nidhi ko dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Nidhi ke sar ke upar hawa me ek window mandraa rahi thi jisme kuch shabd likhe hue the ~

[ Name - Nidhi
Age - 30
Status - Divorce pending.

Bio - Nidhi ki ek beti hai jiska naam hai Juhi. Saath hi ek beta hai jisse wo apne saath rakhna chaahti hai par uske Pati Rajat ne usse apne paas rakha hua hai. Rajat se uska rishta kharaab chal raha hai jiske chalte Nidhi akeli apni beti ke saath ek ghar me rent dete hue rehti hai kyuki wo apne mata pita par bojh nahi bann na chaahti. Uski Maa ko do din pehle hi dil ka daura pada tha aur wo bhi issi hospital me bharti hai. Nidhi ki life boht hi dukh aur pareshaniyo se bhari hui hai.

Favourability - 20
Relationship - Student - Teacher ]

Ye sab kuch Veer ko Nidhi ke sar ke upar nazar aa raha tha.

Veer (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye aapke sar pe...

Nidhi : Huh? Kya hua? Mere sar pe!?

[Arre Buddhu! Ye sirf tum dekh sakte ho? Baaki koi nahi.]

Veer : Nahi! Ma'am! Wo mein aise hi...

'Itna toh mein ek saal me nahi jaan paaya Ma'am ke baare me jitna abhi jaan gaya. Kya kamaal cheez hai ye.'

Usne mann me socha.

'System? Ye favourability 20 ka kya matlab hai?'

[Iska matlab hai ki wo tumhaare baare me kya sochti hai. Ek prakaar se uske mann me tumhare liye jo bhaav hai usko darshaata hai.]

'Toh ye 20 matlab?'

[Matlab ki abhi wo tumhare liye sirf 20 favourability rakhti hai. Jese jese tumhara aur uska relation accha hoega ye badhta jaega. Yadi ye 80 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe chaahta hai. Yadi ye 90 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe dil se pyaar karta hai. Aur yadi 100 hai matlab ki dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne waala vyakti.]

'Samjha!'

Nidhi : Veer? Kaha kho gaye?

Jab Nidhi ne chutki bajaate hue apna haath uske saamne hilaaya toh Veer jese apne khayaalo se baahar aaya.

Veer : Haa! Wo mein... Ma'am...

Nidhi (haath thaamte hue) : Just forget about everything Veer! Aur kuch mat socho. Bas tumhe jald se jald thik hona hai. Okay? And don't think tumhara koi nahi hai. I'm with you okay? Abhi tum rest karo ab. Mein ab kal shaam ko hi aaungi. Aaj mene wese hi leave lii thi. Roz nahi le sakti.

Veer : Jii ma'am! Thank you!

Nidhi : Thank you kesa isme...?? *Smiles* Take care okay?

Veer : Hmmm!

Aur Nidhi uske ward se chali gayi. Veer keval Nidhi ko jaate hue dekhta raha.

Nidhi 30 saal ki ek aisi husn ki mallika prateet hoti thi ki maano keher hi dhaa de. Par limited paiso aur din bhar ki mehnat aur thakaan ke chalte jaise uska husn poora khil ke nahi jhalak paa raha tha. Kyuki wo dhyaan hi nahi de paati thi apne upar.

Ye dekh Veer ko waqai taras aa raha tha uss par. Uski khud ki Maa yaha admit thi par uske bawajood Nidhi ne uski madad ki aur uske liye advance me paise bhi bharwae. Wahi dusri orr uske gharwale jo saari sampatti se sampann hai unhone ek shan bhi nahi socha ki wo jee raha hai ya marr raha hai.

*Ding*

Aur achaanak hi uske dimaag me ghanti baji aur uske saamne ek window khuli.

[Mission : Solve Nidhi's problem.
Reward : ?? points
Time limit : 1 year ]

'Huh? Mission?'

[Haa! Mission mil chuka hai tumhe.]

'Nidhi Ma'am ki problem? Konsi problem?'

[Ye toh tumhe khud dekhna padega.]

'O... Okay!'

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
 
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Update - 6 ~ A New Home

Ab tak...

[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]

Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.

Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!

Ab aage...

Kaafi din yu guzar chuke the. Aur aaj Veer ko hospital se leave milne waali thi. Aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din Nidhi usse dekhne na aayi ho. Aur aisa ek bhi din nahi tha jis din galti se bhi uske gharwalo me se koi usse dekhne aaya ho.

Kitni ajeeb baat thi.

Par thi toh sacchi baat.

Ghar me asal me Brijesh ne kuch nahi bataya tha. Veer ke accident ki baat keval Brijesh aur uski sauteli maa Shweta ko hi pata thi.

Jab Manorath ne Veer ke baare me dubaara pucha toh Brijesh ne jhuth bol ye keh diya ki Veer apne dost ke ghar me thehra hua hai.

Par aisa toh bilkul bhi nahi tha. Kyuki uska koi dost hi nahi tha.

Yaha inn kuch dino me Veer ne System ke baare me badi hi bareeki se jaana.

Usse pata chala ki jese jese wo missions complete karega ya uplabdhiya haasil karega ya izzat kamaega, apna fame badhaega wese wese usse Experience milega.

Aur yahi Experience jab ikhatta hota jaega wese wese hi uske System ka level badhta jaega.

System se usse free me 10 points bhi mile the jo System ne usse uske owner bann'ne ke liye gift ke roop me diye the. Aur Veer ab issi soch me tha ki kis stat me wo points add kare.

'Mein strength me add karta hu. Sahi rahega na?'

[Mein tumhe suggest karungi ki pehle tum apna ye bheja sahi karo. Ahem! Yaani ki apna intelligence badhao.]

'Hmph! Toh fir abhi mein add nahi karna chaahta.'

[Are you sure? Dhyaan rahe! Tum jo bhi changes karoge apne stats me wo raat bhar lenge change hone me. Matlab yadi tum apni strength abhi badhaate ho toh wo abhi nahi badhegi. Tumhe uska result agle din dekhne ko milega.]

'I see!! Hmm! Toh ek kaam karo. 7 points meri strength me daalo. 2 mere intelligence me aur 1 mere appearance me.'

[Are you sure!?]

'Haan!'

[Well okay!]

Aur tabhi ek ghanti baji...

*Ding*

[7 points have been added to strength.
2 points have been added to intelligence.
1 point has been added to appearance.]

Aur uske baad hi Veer ke stats badal chuke the. Par uska effect agli subah se usse dekhne ko milne wala tha.

Stats :
Strength - 10/100
Intelligence - 6/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 7/100

'Good!! Wese... System!?'

[Hmm!??]

'Tumne kaha tha ki tumne meri jaan bachaayi? Kya tum ek marre hue vyakti ko bhi zinda kar sakti ho?!'

[Nahi! Mene sirf apni urja ka istemaal kiya tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki mein ek din tak shut down thi. Aur tum khud bhi behosh the isliye tumhe pata nahi chala.]

'Wow! Toh aise me toh tum mujhe harr waqt khatro se bacha sakti ho hai na?'

[Bilkul bhi nahi! Aisa sochna bhi mat. Wo urja keval ek baar hi istemaal karne ke liye praapt thi mujhe.]

'Ohh mujhe aur batao na iss baare me.'

[Pehle mera level badhao. Abhi tumhe inn baato ko jaan'ne ka haq nahi hai.]

'Okay!'

[Aur haa! Mujhse zyaada baatein mat kiya karo. Jab zaroori ho keval tabhi...]

'Kyu?'

[Kyuki bolte waqt mujhe energy chaahiye. Aur ye energy mein tumhaare hi shareer se leti hu.]

'Fuck!!! Aur tum mujhe ye ab bata rahi ho!? Tabhi mein sochu mujhe itni thakaan kyu mehsoos hoti thi.'

[ :eyes2: ]

***

Ab shaam ka time ho chuka tha aur Veer ko hospital se discharge kar diya gaya tha.

Abhi wo wahi ek bench par baitha hua tha ki Nidhi saare kaagzi kaam karte hue uske paas aayi aur bagal se baith gayi.

Nidhi


Nidhi : Veer!? Saari formalities ho chuki hai. Ab tumhe hospital se chhutkaara mila.

Nidhi ne muskuraate hue kaha.

Veer : Thank you Ma'am! Mein zindagi bhar aapka abhaari rahunga.

Nidhi : Ye tum kesi baatein kar rahe ho Veer? Ek teacher hone ke naate ye toh meri duty hai ki mein apne student ki help karu.

Veer : Fir bhi Ma'am! Aaj kal toh ghar ke apne saath nahi dete aur aapne sirf meri teacher hone ke naate itna kiya. Uske liye thanks toh banta hi hai na?

Iss baar Veer ne smile karte hue kaha. Par uski smile dekh ek baar fir Nidhi ki bauhe sikudi aur usse andar hi andar ek ajeeb sa dard hua.

Nidhi : Ab... Ab tum kaha jaoge Veer? Tumhare gharwale toh...

Veer : Hmm? Mujhe nahi pata Ma'am. Dekhta hu. Kuch na kuch kar hi lunga.

Nidhi : Nahi! Par aise kaha jaoge tum? Tumhe abhi bhi rest ki zaroorat hai. Kaha rahoge? Kya khaoge? Aur college ka kya?

Veer : College? Mujhe kuch nahi pata Ma'am. Jo bhi hoega, dekha jaega.

Wo itna keh ke waha se utha hi tha ki Nidhi ne uska haath thaam liya.

Nidhi : Nahi! Mein tumhe aise jaane nahi de sakti. Bilkul bhi nahi! Kaha jaoge aur tum? Kaha bhatkoge aisi haalat me? Tum... Tum mere saath chalo.

Veer (shocked) : Huh?

Nidhi : Haa! Aaj se... Aaj se tum mere saath rahoge.

Kitni hi asaani se keh dii Nidhi ne ye baat.

Aur kitni hi asaani se Brijesh ne wo baat kahi thi ~ "Nikal jao iss ghar se."

Dono me kitna antar tha.

Aur kismat ka khel toh dekho. Ki uske ghar se usse yu nikaal diya gaya tha aur aaj Nidhi jo ki sirf uski teacher thi wo yu usse apne ghar le jaane taiyaar thi.

Aur yahi dekh ke Veer ki aankho me aasu aa gaye. Usne Nidhi ka status dekha tha. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi khud kitna kasht bhara jeevan vyateet kar rahi thi.

Par iske bawajood usne Veer ko apne ghar par rehne ke liye keh diya.

Veer (namm aankho se) : Nahi! Ma'am! Ye aap... Ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Mein aapko pehle hi boht kasht de chuka hu, ab aur mujhe mushqil me mat daaliye ma'am.

Nidhi : Chup raho ekdum! Aur chalo mere saath.

Veer : Ma'am...

Nidhi : Mene kaha na chup raho. Aaj se tum mere saath hi rahoge. Aur aage ek shabd nahi kahoge tum.

Usne apna haath Veer ke hontho par rakh diya. Nidhi ke komal haatho ka sparsh apne hontho pe paate hi Veer wahi khada ka khada reh gaya. Jab Nidhi ko bhi dhyaan aaya ki usne ekdum se kya kiya usne forun hi apna haath peeche le liya aur uska haath pakad ke usse le jaane lagi.

Veer ke laakho manaane ke baad bhi Nidhi ne uski ek na suni aur usse laake apni scooty par peeche baitha diya.

Nidhi : Acche se pakad ke baithna okay?

Uske bolte hi Veer ke haath Nidhi ki patli kamar pe lipat gaye. Ek pal ke liye toh Nidhi ko bhi ek jhatka sa laga jese hi Veer ke haath uski kamar par bandhe.

Wo iss waqt navy blue saree aur kaala blouse pehni hui thi. Aur peeche se uske aadhe nagn kandhe saaf nazar aa rahe the jo harr pal Veer ko madhosh kar rahe the. Wo khule baal aur wo nasheeli aankhein jo kisi bhi waqt aadmi ko apna deewana bana de.

Thandi hawao se dono ka shareer thanda zaroor ho raha tha par saath hi saath ek ajeeb sii garmi bhi thi jo dono ke hi shareer me iss waqt kahi dabi hui thi.

'Check' Veer ne mann me Nidhi ko peeche se hi dekhte hue kaha toh forun hi Nidhi ke sar ke upar wahi window firse khul gayi.

Sab kuch same hi tha pehle ki tarah siwae ek cheez ke. Aur wo thi...

[Favourability - 30]

Nidhi ki favourability Veer ke prati 10 points se badh gayi thi. Aur kyu na badhti? Wo roz Veer se milne shaam ke waqt aaya karti thi. Roz roz yadi aap kisi se bhi baat karo, aapko thoda boht interest unme aa hi jaata hai. Aisa hi haal kuch Nidhi ka bhi tha.

Veer uska student tha aur iss se pehle kabhi bhi Nidhi ne aise apne kisi bhi student se mulaqaat nahi ki thi. Na hi itni baatein kari thi. Aur toh aur wo ab Veer ko apne ghar le jaa rahi thi. Toh bhala dono ke beech friendship gehri kese nahi hoti?

Veer ke mann me Nidhi ke prati jo respect thi wo ab kayi guna badh chuki thi.

Kitni hi asaani se usne Veer ko apne ghar rehne ko keh diya. Veer jaanta tha ki wo akeli apni beti ke saath rent se rehti hai uske bawajood Nidhi ne uspar iss hadd tak bharosa kar liya ki wo uske saath reh le. Usne ek baar bhi nahi socha ki Veer ko apne ghar par rakhna theek hai ya nahi? Usne ye nahi socha ki uske ghar ki owner kese react karegi ye dekh ke?

Aur isliye Veer ki nazro me Nidhi kisi devi se kam nahi thi.

Veer kass ke uski patli kamar ko apne dono haatho se thaame hue tha. Aur Nidhi bhi Veer ke haatho ko bhali bhaati feel kar paa rahi thi. Na chaahte hue bhi uski dhadkan normal se thodi tezz ho chuki thi.

Iss se pehle keval uske husband ne hi usse aise touch kiya tha. Aur usse hue bhi 2 saal ho chuke the. Aur aaj wahi feeling wo mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Par farq ye tha ki uski kamar ko thaamne waala iss waqt uska husband nahi balki uska student Veer tha. Jo ki uss se 10 saal chota tha.

Aur yahi baat Nidhi ko sata rahi thi. Wo nahi chaahti thi ki Veer jo ki uske chote bhai jesa hai uske touch se wo aisa mehsoos kare. Par inn sab ke bawajood uski dhadkane slow hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.

2 saalo se ye pehli baar tha jab usne kisi mard ko itni paas se mehsoos kiya tha. Aur usse nahi pata tha ki ek ajeeb sii anubhooti ne uske andar janm le liya hai.

Kuch hi derr me jab ghar aaya, Nidhi ne usse dhyaan se utarwaaya aur gaadi park kii.

Wo ek flat me rent se rehti thi. Uska flat 2nd floor par tha. Veer ko lift me le jaate hue wo 2nd floor par pohuchi aur jese hi apne flat ke paas aayi toh chaunk gayi.

Flat ka taala khula hua tha. Usne forun hi bell bajaayi toh kuch seconds me hi darwaaza khul gaya.

Aur andar se uski beti jo ki abhi abhi school jaana shuru kii thi wo daudte hue aayi aur uske perro se lipat gayi, "Mummmmmyyyyy... Mummy aa gayi!"

Hairaan hote hue Nidhi soch me pad gayi. Wo toh flat me taala laga ke apni beti Juhi ko bagal waale flat yaani ki pados me chorr ke gayi thi. Fir ye sab kya tha?

Ki tabhi andar se ek aur shaks baahar aaya. Aur usse dekh Nidhi ke chehre pe hairaani, fir confusion, aur fir khushi jhalakne lagi.

Ek sundar sii ladki aage badhte hue uske gale se lag gayi, "Diiii!!"

Nidhi (gale lagte hue) : Shreya tu? Yaha?

Shreya


Shreya : Kyu?! Nahi aa sakti?

Nidhi : Mera matlab wo nahi tha tu jaanti hai.

Shreya : I know! And yes! Mein yaha. Hehe~ Aur ab se mein yahi rahungi aapke saath.

Nidhi (hairaani me) : Kyaaaa?

Shreya : Haa! Itna shocked kyu ho? Aap nahi chaahti kya ki mein yaha rahu?

Nidhi : Nahi! Mein bas ye soch rahi hu ki achanak se tum yaha.

Shreya : Hmm! Kyuki Maa papa ne khud kaha hai.

Veer khade khade itna toh jaan gaya tha ki saamne khadi ladki Nidhi Ma'am ki choti behan thi. Fir bhi usne check karna hi sahi samjha.

Veer (mann me) : Check!

Aur Shreya ke sar ke upar tabhi wahi window khul gayi aur uspe likhe shabd Veer ko nazar aane lage.

[ Name - Shreya
Age - 24
Status - Maiden in search for true love.

Bio - Shreya Nidhi ki sagi choti behan hai. Uska mann padhayi me shuru se hi nahi lagta tha aur isliye aaj wo ek youtuber hai. YouTube pe stream karte hue games khelna aur vlogs banaana usse pasand hai. Abhi zyaada subscribers na hone ke kaaran wo zyaada busy nahi rehti. Apni behan Nidhi se boht zyaada pyaar karti hai. Uska sapna hai ek boht badi youtuber bann'na. Sacche pyaar ki talaash me hai. Par koi mila nahi hai abhi. Shreya love at first sight par believe karti hai.

Favourability - 0
Relationship - Strangers.]

Shreya ke baare me jaante hi Veer thoda hairaan tha. Usse dekh ke koi nahi keh sakta tha ki wo ek youtuber thi.

'Hmm! Interesting... Interesting!'

[Sapne dekhna chorr do master!]

'Huh? Kyu??'

[Nahi degi!]

'What the..!?'

[Master aapne dekha na? Wo love at first sight par believe rakhti hai. Pehli nazar me pyaar. Aur aapko abhi dekh ke koi bhi ladki aapke pyaar me nahi padne waali.]

Iske pehle ki Veer System ko jawaab de paata. Shreya ki awaaz uske kaano me padi.

Shreya : Ye kaun hai?!

Nidhi : Ye hai Veer! Mera student.

Shreya : Ohh! Toh? Tuition shuru kar dii kya aapne?

Nidhi : Nahi! Aaj se ye mere saath hi rahega.

Pal bhar ke liye maano sannaata sa chha gaya aur tabhi Shreya ekdum se chillaayi,

Shreya : Whaaaaaaaatttt??

Nidhi : Haaa!

Shreya : Kya kaha aapne? Ye... Ye aapke saath rahega?

Nidhi : Hmm! Lambi kahani hai.

Shreya : Wait! What? But kyu? Aap aise kese kisi ko bhi apne ghar me...!?

Nidhi : Sshhh! Andar chalo pehle.

Andar le jaate hue Nidhi ne Shreya ko Veer ke baare me sab kuch bata diya, jisse sunn Shreya ka dil bhi thoda paseej gaya aur wo Veer ko rakhne ke liye taiyaar ho gayi. Abhi Nidhi washroom gayi hui thi ki tabhi Shreya uske paas aayi...

Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...

Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.
 
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Ab tak...

Shreya : Dekho! Hum tumhe yaha rakh rahe hai kyuki meri dii badi hi bholi hai aur sabki madad karti hai. Aur hum tumhe yaha rakhne ke liye taiyaar hai. Par meri dii ke baare me koi bhi galat khayaal mat laana samjhe? Hmph! I'm watching you...

Aur wo do ungli Veer ki aankho ki taraf karte hue mud ke apni gaand matkaate hue andar chali gayi.

Ab aage...

Ek bade se bunglow me iss waqt ek bade se room me ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki apni comfortable chair par baithi hui thi. Aur kuch zaroori kaagzi kaam kar rahi thi. Ghar itna aalishaan tha ki pucho mat.

Tabhi uske room ka darwaza khula aur andar ek middle aged aadmi ne aakar uske saamne ek file rakhi aur bola,

Aadmi : Madam! Ye rahi file.

Ladki : Jii!

Aadmi : Wo... Madam!

Ladki : Hmm?

Aadmi : Wo... xxxxxxxx company hamaare saath deal karna chaahti hai. Ek bar firse mujhe unka call aaya tha.

Ladki (lambi saas lete hue) : Mene kitni baar aapko kaha hai ki unhe mana kar dijiye par aap ulta unko latka rahe ho? Mujhe nahi karni koi bhi deal unke saath.

Aadmi : Par madam isme galat kya hai? Ek acchi company hai aur ulta hume hi fayda hai. Aap bhala ye deal kyu nahi karna chaahti? Buraayi kya hai?

Ladki : Aap jaante hai na? Mein meeting ke waqt iss company ke maalik se mili thi. And, I can tell he's not trustworthy.

Aadmi : Par mujhe toh unka ravaiyya ekdum pasand aaya. Mujhe nahi lagta ki...

Ladki : Aap nahi jaante. Mein bhala kabhi galat hui hu?

Aadmi : Nahi! Par...

Ladki : Then bharosa rakhiye! Aur uss kaam ka kya jo mene aapko saupa tha!?

Aadmi : Jii... Wo mein... Jald hi details pata lag jaengi madam.

Ladki : Itna sa kaam karne me itna time lag raha hai?

Aadmi : Sheher bada hai madam. Thoda sa time lagega. Aur ab iss kaam ke liye mein CBI me toh nahi jaunga na? Par aap nishchint rahiye. Jald ho jaega.

Ladki : Hmm!

Aur wo aadmi baahar nikal gaya. Idhar wo ladki apne anguthe ko zorr se apne daato tale dabaate hue kisi soch me pad gayi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi wo iss waqt. Par uske chehre par aasha, jigyaasa aur tanaav ke mile jule bhaav utpann ho rahe the.

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Nidhi ka ghar...

Veer ko apne ghar me laate hi sabse pehle Nidhi ne apne kapde badle aur usne apni saree utaar ke ek red night gown daal liya. Wo bhali bhaati jaanti thi ki ab wo akeli nahi hai, ek naujavan ladka bhi uske saath uske ghar me rehne waala hai par iske bawajood usne gown pehna. Jese usse vishvaash tha ki Veer koi bhi utt pataang harqat nahi karega.

Uski choti behan bhi yahi maujood thi. Yadi Nidhi chaahti toh iss waqt safety ke darr se wo Veer ko ye keh ke apne ghar se nikaal sakti thi ki ab uski choti behan aa gayi hai toh jagah nahi hai ghar me theherne ki, ya ye keh sakti thi ki ab uski behan aayi hui hai aur aise me wo Veer ko apne saath nahi rakh sakti. Wo kuch bhi keh sakti thi.

Par Nidhi bilkul bhi peeche na hati. Aur usse itna toh vishwaash tha ki Veer koi bhi galat harqat nahi karega uske saath.

Iss waqt red gown me wo qayaamat lag rahi thi. Poori aag ka shola. Veer toh bas yahi soch raha tha ki kitna bada murkh hoga Nidhi ka pati jo aisi aurat ko apne haath se jaane de raha tha.

Baahar nikalte hue Nidhi ne Veer ko nahaane ke liye kaha, kyuki itne dino se wo hospital me tha aur aise me zaahir sii baat thi ki usse ek bath ki sakht zaroorat thi. Par dikkat thi underwear aur kapdo ki. Veer toh khaali haath ghar se nikla tha. Bhala ab chaddi kaha se lae wo? Na uske paas extra kapde the, na hi wo koi Doraemon tha.

Hospital me jo kapde usse mile the wahi wo iss waqt pehna hua tha. Kyuki uski college ki dress toh khoon se pehle hi kharaab ho chuki thi. Aur abhi wo issi duwidha me tha ki kya kiya jaaye,

Veer : Umm... Ma'am mein naha toh lu but wo...

Kehte waqt uska chehra halka laal pad gaya toh Nidhi ne confused hote hue pucha.

Nidhi : Kya dikkat hai Veer?

Veer : Wo... Mere kapde? Aur underwear!? Mere paas nahi hai...

Bolte hi wo blush karne laga. Akhir usne bol bhi kese diya ye? Mann me wo khud se hi sawaal kar raha tha.

Aur ye sunn Nidhi ke bol bhi thoda ladkhada gaye,

Nidhi : Ohh! Haa! Arre... Wo... Mein bhi na... Mein ek kaam karti hu... Veer! Tum nahao... Mein shopping mart jaati hu... Aur udhar se le aaungi... Kuch kapde bhi le aaungi daily use ke liye.

Uski baat sunn pal bhar ke liye Veer ekdum maun ho gaya.

'Did she really said that? Ma'am mere liye kapde aur underwear lene jaa rahi hai?'

Aur ye sochte hi uske shareer me ek ajeeb si halchal hui andar hi andar.

Veer : Ma'am ye aap kya keh rahi ho? Aap rehne dijiye... Mein manage kar lunga...

Nidhi : Arre kya manage kar loge? Dobaara se wahi pehnoge kya? Tum ye bucket me kapde utaar ke rakh dena, mein washing machine me dho dungi.

Aur itna kehte hi wo mud ke jaane lagti hai ki tabhi usse yaad aata hai ki usne size toh pucha hi nahi.

Nidhi : Wo!! Tumhara size Veer? Kapdo ka?

Veer : Ma'am t shirt mujhe M size ki fit aati hai. Baaki...

Nidhi : Okay! Aur neeche ke liye mein lower le aaungi thik?

Veer : Jiii!

Wo fir se mud ke jaane waali thi ki tabhi usse firse kuch yaad aaya aur wo sochte hi uske gaal ekdum surkh laal pad gaye.

Wo palti aur Veer ko dekh badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,

Nidhi (blush) : Wo... Wo... Tumhari... Underwear ka size?

Ye sawaal sunte hi Veer khud stabdh sa khada raha.
Ab bataana toh padega hi...

Usne apna thook nigalte hue sharmaate hue bataaya,

Veer (blush) : Ma'am... Wo... Mera... 85 hai...

Nidhi (blush) : 8... 85!?

Veer (blush) : 85 cm.

Nidhi (blush) : O... Okay!

Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal ke bhaag gayi. Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lete hue bathroom me pravesh kiya. Pehli baar koi ladki uske liye ye sab cheeze khareed rahi thi. Bada hi ajeeb sa lag raha tha usse.

Kuch derr baad...

Nidhi shopping kar ke aa chuki thi aur Veer ke liye wo kuch kapde khareed ke le aayi thi saath hi saath uske undergarments bhi. Poori tarah se jab Veer taiyaar hoke baahar aaya toh dekha ki Nidhi ke haath furti me kitchen ke kaamo me lage hue the.

Nidhi khud iss waqt bada hi sharma rahi thi. Iss se pehle usne apne pati tak ki bhi kabhi underwear na khareedi thi. Aur aaj wo pehli baar kisi mard ke liye underwear khareedne gayi thi aur wo bhi uske apne hi student ki.

Paas aate hue Veer kitchen me hi side ke platform se tik ke khada ho gaya aur Nidhi ko dekhne laga jo iss waqt roti belne me busy thi.

Veer ki aahat paa ke hi usne ek baar Veer ko mud ke dekha uske baad waapas se roti belni lagi aur dheere dheere khud hi baat karne lagi,

Nidhi : Fatafat roti sek deti hu aur Veer mene ye fry daal aur mix veg sabzi bana dii hai. Tum kha loge na? Dekho toh... Aaj pehla din hai aur mein kuch bhi special na bana paayi. Kal pakka kuch special banaungi. Tumhe kya pasand hai Veer? Jo tum bologe kal wahi banega... Aaj na jaldi me thi aur hospital se aate aate kaafi thak gayi... Thoda rest karungi na toh kal ekdum fresh mehsoos karungi... Fir kal hum sabhi eksaath special dinner karenge... Landlady ko bhi inform karna hai ki ab se tum mere saath rahoge... Yadi wo rent badhaati hai toh badha de... Wo dekh lungi mein... Uski tension mat lena tum haa?

Itna sab kuch wo bolti jaa rahi thi, uske haath itni speed me chal rahe the ki jitni baar wo roti belti uski chuudiyo ki khanak utni hi baar aur tezz shor karti. Roti belne ke kaaran uske haath ek rythm me hil rahe the aur ussi rythm se uske kaano me lagi hui baali bhi hil rahi thi.

Nidhi ko jese hi ehsaas hua ki usne itna sab bola par Veer ne koi pratikriya nahi dii toh wo palti aur Veer ko dekhi.

Aur usne dekha ki Veer keval apne haath baandhe platform se tike usse hi nihaar raha tha. Usse apne prati aise dekh uske gaalo par halki laali chhaa gayi.

Nidhi (blush) : Aise... Aise kya dekh rahe ho Veer!?

Veer : Dekh raha hu ki aap kitni mehnat karti ho Ma'am.

Nidhi (smiles) : Mehnat toh karni hi padti hai sabko. Tabhi toh zindagi chalti hai.

Veer (smiles) : Hmm!

Aur wo waapas se apne kaam me lag gayi par kuch derr baad hi uske kaano me Veer ki awaaz padi,
"Aapne itna sab kuch kyu kiya mere liye ma'am?"

Aur ye sawaal sunte hi Nidhi jiske haath abhi roti belne me lage hue the wo achanak hi ruk gaye.

Usne palat ke Veer ko dekha aur bolne hi waali thi ki firse Veer ki awaaz ne usse rok diya.

Veer : Mein jaanta hu ki aap yahi kahengi ki ye aapka ek teacher hone ke naate farz tha. Par aapne mere liye ek farz se kahi zyaada kiya hai Ma'am. Aur abhi bhi kar rahi ho. Ye sab kapde, ye mera yaha rehna, hospital me wo advanced fees, mujhe roz dekhne aana, haalchaal puchna, Kyu???

Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ne ek gehri saas lii aur boli,

Nidhi : Kyuki mein jaanti hu tum kesa feel kar rahe ho Veer. Mein jaanti hu akelapan kesa hota hai. Kesa hota hai ghar se baahar nikalna. Kesa mehsoos hota hai. Isliye mein ye sab kar rahi hu. Aur... Bhale hi college me hamaari zyaada baat nahi hui Veer. But meri nazar apne harr ek student par rehti hai. Mujhe pata hai ki kon kesa hai. Mein jaanti thi ki tumhara koi dost nahi hai. Aur aise me tum kaha jaate? Mene wahi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga.

Veer : Aur ye jaante hue bhi ki aap ek ladke ko apne ghar laa rahi ho, ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki landlady aur aas pados ke log kya sochenge iss baare me? Ye jaante hue bhi ki aapki behan bhi yahi rehti hai aapke saath aur iske bawajood aap ek anjaan ladke ko yu rehne de rahi hai apne ghar me?

Nidhi (smiles) : Yes! Because I believe you!

Aur itna sunte hi Veer ka shareer sihar utha.

Veer : Kyuuu???

Nidhi : Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer? Tumhe kya lagta hai ki I don't know? Kya mujhe nahi pata ki log mujhe kin nazro se dekhte hai? Ghar se college, college se ghar, itne logo ki nazar mujhpe padti hai. Kuch jaan pehchaan ke toh kuch anjaan. Tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe nahi pata wo kin nazro se mujhe ghurte hai? Kya chalta hai unke mann me? Yaha tak ki college ke students jo na jaane kitne saal chote hai umr me...

Kehte waqt uske honth thar thara rahe the aur Veer ne notice kiya ki uski aankhein halki bheeg chuki thi.

Nidhi : I know.... I know everything Veer! I know everything.

Usne zorr se kass ke apne gown ka ek hissa bheench liya aur nazre neeche kar lii. Aaj pehli baar Veer ko khud kisi ke liye itna bura lag raha tha. Uska khud ka dil tadap raha tha Nidhi ki aisi haalat dekh.

Nidhi : But tum...

Usne nazre uthaate hue dubaara bolna shuru kiya. Aur iss waqt Veer bhali bhaati dekh sakta tha unn aasuo ko jo Nidhi ki palko par saje hue the.

Nidhi : Tumhari aankhein kabhi bhi nahi bhatki... And that's why... I believe you!

Nidhi ke bol sunte hi Veer ke shareer ke roye khade ho gaye.

Wo samajh chuka tha Nidhi kya baat bata rahi thi. Yahi ki kese log usse taadte hai aur khaa jaane waali nazro se ghurte hai. Yaha tak ki college ke students bhi jo usse aise ghurte the ki maano kabhi bhi uspe toot padenge. Par Veer ne aajtak kabhi bhi Nidhi ko wesi nazro se nahi dekha tha.

Jab jab Nidhi uss se baat karti, ya toh wo nazre jhuka ke baat karta tha ya fir uske chehre me dekhte hue. Naa ki uske shareer pe nazar maarte hue. Aur ye baat Nidhi bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Logo ki nazro aur unke iraado se wo harr tarah se parichit thi. Yahi kaaran tha ki usse Veer pe vishwaash tha. Uske iraado aur uski aankho par usse vishwaash tha.

"Dekho toh... Mein bhi na... Kya boring baato ko lekar baith gayi. Aur tum ye mat sochna bilkul bhi Veer ki tumhe ab kaam nahi karna padega. Boht kaam karwaungi tumse samjhe!?"

Nidhi ne apne aasu ko halke haath se pochte hue ek smile ke saath mazaakiya dhang me kaha, toh Veer bhi badle me muskura diya,

Veer : Aapka hukum sar aankho par ma'am.

Abhi usne bola hi tha ki tabhi Nidhi ki ungli dhoke se garam garam Daal se bhare pan par lag gayi aur uske muh se ek aah nikal gayi...

"Aaahhhh!!! Ssss.... Ouch!!!"

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne aage badh Nidhi ki jali hui ungli apne muh me bhar lii...

*Sannaata*

Ab bhar toh liii ungli muh me josh josh me...

Par ab Veer ko khayaal aaya ki usne kya kar diya.
Yadi iss waqt koi gaana Veer ki situation ko describe kar sakta tha toh woh tha~
Laude lag gaye...

Idhar Nidhi hakki bakki sii khadi Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uski aankho me achambhav saaf nazar aa raha tha. Uska muh halka khul chuka tha.

Veer ki zubaan aur andar se muh ka garam taapmaan wo bhali bhaati apni ungli par mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Jalan aur dard toh jese wo bhul hi chuki thi.

Dono ek dusre ki aankho me aankhe daal dekh rahe the.

Ki tabhi...

"Tururu tururu tururu ruru ruru... Aaah! Ye shaam ko late nahaane me maza hi aa jaata hai."

Shreya fridge me se orange juice ki bottle se juice peete peete kitchen me aa gayi... Aur usne jo saamne dekha...

*Phhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuu*

Saara ka saara juice uske muh se nikal ke neeche zameen par jaa gira. Uski aankhein aisi phaili hui thi maano jese bechaari ne bhoot dekh liya ho. Muh khula ka khula...

Veer uski badi behan ki ungli apne muh me daale hue khada tha. Ab bas teeno ek dusre ko dekh rahe the aur ek khaamoshi sii chhaa gayi.

Veer : ....

Nidhi : ......

Shreya : .....

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Sorry! Iss update se action start hone wala tha story pace pakadti but mujhe laga ek ye update zaroori tha. Ab next update se Veer apne stats badhane niklega. Like zaroor karna pasand aaye toh.
Dhanyavaad!
 
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Mega Update

Update - 8 ~ A New Mission?

Ab tak...

Veer uski badi behan ki ungli apne muh me daale hue khada tha. Ab bas teeno ek dusre ko dekh rahe the aur ek khaamoshi sii chhaa gayi.

Veer : ....

Nidhi : ......

Shreya : .....

[ :popcorn: ]

Ab aage...

Iss waqt table ke saamne sofe par Nidhi aur Veer dono hi eksaath baithe hue the aur dono ki hi nazre neeche thi. Wahi unki dusri taraf Shreya single seat sofe par viraajmaan thi.

Uski nazre dono ke hi chehro par tiki hui thi. Khaaskar Veer par. Wo toh usse khaa jaane waali nazro se ghur rahi thi.

Ki tabhi Veer ke mann me ghanti baji...

*Ding*

[2 points have been rewarded.]

'2 points? Ye kisliye?'

[Uplabdhi ke liye!]

'Kesi uplabdhi?'

[Ek shadi shuda khubsoorat aurat ki ungli ko apne muh me bhar bhar ke uska lutf liya. Ye ek uplabdhi se kam hai kya?]

'What the...!?'

[Add karne hai points master?! Changes subah dekhne milenge!]

'Hmm! Add them to my intelligence.'

[Sure!?]

'Yesss!'

*Ding*

[2 points have been added to intelligence.]

[ Stats :
Strength - 10/100
Intelligence -8/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 7/100]

'Good! Yadi sirf ungli muh me bharne se 2 points mile hai toh yadi mein... Fuck! Veer kesi kesi baatein sochne laga tu!?'

Abhi iss se pehle wo aur baatein kar paata system se Shreya ki awaaz usse hosh me laayi,

Shreya : Ab bataoge ki kya tha wo sab?

Nidhi : Shreya... Jesa tu soch rahi hai wesa kuch bhi nahi hai.

Shreya : Aap chup rahiye dii! Mein iss se puch rahi hu. Ohh hello~ bataoge kuch? Ya nahi?

Veer : Wait! I can explain.

Shreya (aage jhuk kar) : Toh bataiye janaab!!!

Veer : Wo... Wo toh... Wo bas... Ma'am ka haath achaanak hi jal gaya toh mene usse wo... Aise achaanak se usse thanda karne ke liye muh me bhar liya... Ek reflex action tha... Bas... Aur kuch nahi!

Shreya : Accha bacchu?? Toh maan lo ki meri ungli bhi yadi jal gayi toh usse bhi muh me bhar loge?

Veer : Haa!

Shreya : Whaaaaaaaatttt??

Veer : No! Mera matlab...

Shreya (ungli dikhaate hue) : My god! Suno! Ekdum kaan khol ke. Meri dii se ekdum dur rehna samjhe? Yadi mene zara bhi dekha na ki tum dii ke paas fattyaa rahe ho toh fir dekhna.

Veer : O... Okay!

Nidhi : Shreya! Kesi baatein kar rahi hai tu? Veer aisa nahi hai.

Shreya : Aap toh boliye hi mat. Bade acche se muh me ungli diye khadi thi aap toh...

Nidhi (blush) : Shreyyyaaaaaa!!!

Shreya : Hmph! Chalo dinner kare!

Aur ye maamla settle hote hi dinner shuru ho gaya.

Veer ne ek baar firse dono ko check kiya toh paaya ki Nidhi ki favourability 5 ank se badh chuki thi aur ab 35 par thi. Wahi Shreya ki jaha zero thi waha ab 5 ank nazar aa raha tha.

Dinner ke waqt uske bagal se Nidhi baithi thi toh wahi uske saamne Shreya aur uski god me Juhi baithi hui thi.

Aur dono hi kuch khuspusaate hue Veer ko ghurte hue baatein kar rahi thi...

'Ye dono... Kya baatein kar rahi hai ye mujhe dekh dekh ke...!?'

Shreya aur Juhi aapas me kisi khusur pusur me lage hue the.

Shreya : Juhi!!

Juhi : Hmm!

Shreya : Ye bhaiya jab bhi tumhari mummy ke paas jae na, mujhe bataana thik!

Juhi : Hmmm Hmmm! Par didi... Ye bhaiya kaun hai?

Shreya : Ye tumhari mummy ke chote bhai hai. Hehe~ Inko Mama kaha karo okay?

Juhi : Hmm! Hmmm!

Tabhi Juhi Shreya ki goad se utar Veer ko dekhne lagi aur boli,

"Mama! Ab se aap yahi rahoge?"

*Cough Cough*

Aisa phanda shayad hi Veer ko khaate time kabhi laga hoga.

'Kya mene sahi suna? Mama?'

[Haa! Mama! Haha~ Abhi boht mehnat karni baaki hai master!]

Nidhi : Arre Veer? Kya hua? Araam se khao...

Bolte hue, Nidhi uski peeth sehlaane lagi.

Shreya : Hahahahahaha~

Nidhi : Hass kyu rahi ho?

Shreya : Juhi ne isse Mama bulaaya toh isko khaasi aa gayi. Hahahaha~

Nidhi : J... Juhi!??

Juhi : Haa mummy! Ab ye Mama apne saath hi rahenge?

Shreya : Hahahaha~ Ek number Juhi...

Nidhi (blush) : Ummm... Haa beta!

Aur inhi sab hassi mazaak me ye dinner samaapt hua.

Veer iss waqt baahar hi sofe par so raha tha toh wahi Shreya ke sang Juhi aur Nidhi teeno andar bedroom me sthit bed par so rahi thi.

Jab sawera hua aur Veer apni neend se baahar aaya toh sabse pehle wo bathroom me gaya fresh hone.

Aur jaate hi uski nazar mirror me apne aap par padi. Kuch seconds toh wo yu hi apne aap ko dekhta raha aur fir ek jhatka laga usse.

'Fuck!!!!'

[You feel different right?]

'Haan! Mein... Strong mehsoos kar raha hu. Chehre me wese kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Mehsoos toh ho raha hai ki kuch badla hai but dikhaayi nahi de raha.'

[Appearance me ek hi point add kiya tha. Kya hi samajh aaega Master?]

'Toh! Kal mujhe Ma'am ki ungli muh me lene se 2 points mile the. Toh yadi mein... Kisi aur ladki ke saath aisa karu toh!?'

[Better quality! Better points!]

'Kya matlab?'

[Matlab jitni acchi ladkiya, jitna zyaada unka status, utne hi acche points.]

'Kya partiality hai.'

[Master! Aapne abhi tak mujhe naam nahi diya. Isliye, please! Name the system.]

'Naam?'

[Haa master!]

'Hmm! Wese... Tumne meri jaan bachaayi hai. Tum jab aayi ho jab mein iss duniya se jaane waala tha. Tumne mujhe sahara diya. Sach kahu toh mein waqai khushkismat hu jo tumhara saath mila. Kabhi kisi ne mujhse itni saari baatein nahi kii hongi. Haa tumhara ravaiyya thoda attitude wala tha shuru me but abhi thik hai. Meri life me tum kisi angel ki tarah aayi ho. Isliye... Aaj se tumhara naam... Pari.'

[System's default name has been changed to Pari!]

'Pari?? Theek hai na naam!?'

[Yes! Master! Ab se aap mujhe Pari kehke hi sambodhit karna.]

'Okay Pari!'

Abhi Veer brush hi kar raha tha ki wahi ghanti uske dimaag me firse baji,

*Ding*

[Mission : Lose your virginity.
Rewards : ?? Points.
Time limit : 18 hours.]

Aur Mission padhte hi Veer ki hawa tight ho gayi. Uske muh se tooth brush chhutak ke basin me hi gir pada.

'What the hell????? Pari??? Keh do ki tum ne prank kiya hai.'

[Master! Koi prank nahi hai. Ye missions randomly generate hote hai. Mera control nahi hai isme kuch.]

'Arre par abhi Nidhi Ma'am ka bhi toh mission mila tha na mujhe? Fir ye alag ekdum se?'

[Zaroori nahi hai ki ek baar me ek hi mission mile master.]

'Really? Fuck! Time limit 18 ghante? What the hell? Are you kidding me? Kaha se lose karu apni virginity? 18 ghante me ladki kaha se dhundu ab mein? Khud ko hi chodunga kya? Aur ye koi choti sii baat nahi hai. Mein kese apni virginity ko yu kho sakta hu?'

[Virginity ka toh nahi pata master, par yadi aapne mission time pe poora nahi kiya toh aap mujhe zaroor kho doge.]

'Damn it!!'

Kheejte hue usne apne haath basin pe patak diye.

[Aapko kese bhi apni virginity khoni hai.]

'No way! Pari!! Arre isme toh rewards bhi nahi dikha raha hai.'

[Mein kuch nahi kar sakti Master!]

'Fuck this!!!'

[Fuck a woman instead Master!]

'Shut upppp!!!'

[I can't help you with this master.]

'Kya mein puch sakta hu meri pyaari Pari ki iss type ka mission mujhe kyu mila hai?'

[Mujhe nahi pata master. But jaha tak mera andaaza hai, ye isliye hai taaki aap maturity ki duniya me kadam rakho. Khud ko mature banao.]

'Waah! Kya baat hai! Adhbhut!'

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Shaam ke 7:30 baj rahe the. Aur Veer Nidhi ke ghar se 5 baje ka nikla hua tha. Ladki chodne ke liye. Yaani ki apni virginity khone. Ek ladke se aadmi bann ne. Dhaayi ghante se wo idhar se udhar bas fattyaa raha tha. Par ladki ko dur dur tak naamo nishaan nahi tha. Usse ek aisi ladki chahiye thi jo sundar bhi ho, khud raazi bhi ho aur sex ke baad koi lafda bhi na ho. Par aisi ladki milna toh jese khet me sui dhundne ke baraabar tha.

Uski kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Ghar pe wo Shreya ko ye keh ke jaldi nikal gaya ki wo dost ke yaha jaa raha hai. Nidhi uss waqt college se lauti nahi thi. Warna Nidhi toh uss se 100 sawaal karti. Kyuki wo jaanti thi ki uske koi dost nahi hai.

'Hum pichle ek ghante se iss bench pe baithe hue hai.'

[Hmm! Baithe toh hue hai. :approve:]

'Aur mujhe apni virginity lose karni hai.'

[Hmm! Karni toh hai.:approve:]

'Aur nahi ki toh mein tumhe kho dunga.'

[Hmm! Kho toh doge.:approve:]

Aur wo chillaayaa...
'Fuccckkkkkkk thiiiiiiissssss missionnn...'

[I told you to hire a slut. But aapko karna hi nahi hai uske saath...]

'Of course! Mein apna pehli baar aise kese kho sakta hu?'

[Go to Club then. Waha koi pasand aa jaaye aapko?]

'Hmm? Clubs me milegi mujhe koi? Unko ready kese karaunga?'

[Ye toh aap pe depend karta hai.]

'Fine!!'

Ghumte firte Veer bhaiya pohuch gaye ek club ke baahar. Pub hi tha ek prakaar se but with luxury rooms. Daaru piyo, ladki patao, thoko, aur baahar.

Samay samay aisi jagaaho par raids bhi padti rehti thi. Par insaan toh hote hi haraami hai. Ek baar pakde gaye agli baar se fir wahi kaam.

[Aapke paas paise toh hai na?]

'Hmm? Paise? Nahi! Mere paas toh phooti kaudi bhi nahi hai.'

[What the hell? Toh andar kese jaoge?]

Veer jeb me haath daale Club ke baahar apni pockets tatol raha tha. Tabhi uske kaano me ek madhur awaaz padi,

"You don't have money!?"

Usne jese hi palat ke dekha toh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Saamne ek behad hi khubsoorat ladki khadi hui thi. Itni khubsoorat ki usse dekh bechaare Veer ka muh khula ka khula hi reh gaya.

Ek kaali jaangh tak aati one piece dress jo uske gore badan se ekdum kass ke chipki hui thi. Uske stan ke ubhaar ki aakriti wo bhali bhaati dekh paa raha tha.

Uske khule kaale baal jo sirf kandho tak the. Halka make-up, hontho pe wo halki gulaabi lipstick, kaano me lambi stylish baali, harr jagah se wo saundarya ki pratima lag rahi thi.

Veer bechaare ki bolti band ho gayi thi. Wo shayad ab tak ki sabse khubsurat ladki thi jo Veer ne dekhi thi.



Veer : Wo...

Ladki : You don't have money right?

Uski awaaz sunn Veer ne haa me sar hila diya.

Ladki : Then, come with me. I'll pay for you.

Veer : Huh???

Veer ne notice kiya ki uss ladki ke peeche 2 hatte katte bodyguards bhi the jo kaala suit aur kaala chashma lagae hue the.

Aur Veer ko mana karna theek na laga. Wese bhi usse andar toh jaana hi tha. Jese bhi entry mile.

Entry milte hi andar ka nazaara dekhte hi Veer ki aankhein hi chaundhiya gayi.

Ek toh dherr saari disco lights, upar se high volume pe music, stage pe ladkiya aise naach rahi thi ki maano stage hi tod dengi.

Na koi hosh, na koi thikaana bas kahi pe bhi naache jaa rahi thi. Ladke bhi unhi ke saath kamar matkaane me lage hue the toh kuch logo ke toh alag hi scene chal rahe the.

Veer ne dekha ki side me kayi saare luxury sofe lage hue the jinpe baith ke ladka ladki kissing me doobe the. Ye saara nazaara Veer apni zindagi me pehli baar dekh raha tha.

'Damn!!!'

[Welcome to the world of Adults.]

Daaru toh aise pee rahe the log, arre pee kya kuch toh hawa me fek rahe the aur neeche launde laundiya muh khole beer ki boond apne muh me lene ki koshish kar rahe the.

Jese maano wo amrit ho unke liye. Ye sab scene dekh ke Veer ki bauhe sikud gayi. Kya inhi sab me inhe maza aata hai? Wo soch me doob gaya.

Saamne ke side bar tha jaha ladies aur gents dono hi hawa me bottle uchhaalte hue beer whiskey sab kuch serve kar rahe the toh wahi side me kitchen tha jaha se khaane peene ka samaan bhi tables pe serve kiya jaa raha tha.

Veer ne dekha ki jagah jagah hookah ke pipes bhi rakhe hue the jisse ladkiya badi hi chaud aur maze se pee rahi thi. Kuch toh besudh se nashe me doobe idhar udhar pade hue the. Na hi unhe koi uthaane waala tha aur na hi unka saath dene wala.

[Dekha master! Ye hai adults ki duniya. Shayad isliye aapko ye mission mila hai. Taaki aap mature bano.]

'Hmm! Dekh raha hu Pari!! Dekh raha hu...'

Veer chalte chalte uss ladki ke saath saamne bar ki seats par baith gaya.

Par abhi bada hi atpata lag raha tha usse. Uske sar ke peeche do bodyguards aise khade the ki maano yadi Veer ne galti se bhi uss ladki ko touch kiya toh wo dono bodyguard Veer ke ussi waqt do tukde kar denge.

Aur AC chalne ke bawajood usse ye sochte hi paseena aane laga.

Tabhi achanak uss ladki ne unn dono bodyguards ko dekhte hue kaha,

"You both go outside. I need some time alone."

Aur ye sunte hi dono bodyguards duwidha me pad gaye.

Bodyguard 1 : Sorry Miss! Aapko yaha akela chorr hum kahi nahi jaa sakte.

Ladki : I told you na... Go outside!

Bodyguard 1 : I'm sorry Miss!

Ladki (ghurte hue) : Jaate ho ya nahi? Mujhe baar baat kehna pasand nahi. It's an order.

Bodyguard 1 : Miss! I'm sorry! But bade maalik ka kehna hai...

Ladki : Bade maalik ko mein samjha dungi. Ab jao. Don't worry! Yadi koi bhi gadbad hui I will call you. Just go outside.

Bodyguard 1 : But Miss...

Bodyguard 2 : Theek hai Miss! Par aap kisi bhi mushqil me ho, bas ek call kar dijiyega. Hum just baahar hi hai. Chalo Raghu!

Raghu : Par Jassi...

Jassi : Chalo... Miss ko akela rehne do kuch derr...

Ladki : Thanks Jassi...

Jassi : It's okay Miss!

Aur Jassi Raghu ko leke waha se baahar nikal gaya.

Ab keval Veer aur wo ladki hi saath me agal bagal baithe hue the.

Tabhi ek lady bartender unke paas aayi aur unse unka order puchi...

Ladki : One cosmopolitan...

Bartender : Sure Ma'am! And you Sir?

Veer : Huh?

[Order do Master!]

'But mene kabhi sharaab nahi pee Pari! Fuck! Mujhe toh naam bhi nahi aate. Wo side me kya rakha hai... Orange orange sa... Orange juice lag raha hai. Bol du kya?'

[Hahaha~ bol dijiye master!!]

Veer : Umm... Wo... One orange juice...

Bartender bechaari Veer ka order sunn bada hi ajeeb sa muh banaayi aur usse upar se neeche tak dekhi fir peeche chali gayi.

'Fuuuuckkkk! She was laughing... She fucking laughed... I saw her...'

[Of course! Hahahaha~]

'Pari mene kabhi beer nahi pee, yadi abhi piyunga toh nasha toh chadhega hi... Aur tum jaanti ho na. Hum yaha mission pe hai. Tumhe toh meri madad karni chaahiye.'

[Sorry Master! But it was... It was just too funny hahahahaha~]

Iss se pehle ki wo Pari ko daat paata uss ladki ke bol usse sunaayi diye.

Ladki : So? Why are you here?

Veer : Huh!? Mein wo... Kuch kaam tha mujhe...

Ladki : Ohhh!

Veer ko bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha. Ye ladki thi toh ekdum apsara jesi, par uske chehre par koi bhi bhaav nahi the. Ekdum expressionless. Shuru se ant tak Veer ne uske chehre me koi badlaav nahi dekha. Na koi utsaah, na koi josh, na koi khushi, na koi dukh... Kuch bhi nahi!

Tabhi bartender unki drinks laayi aur unhe serve kari. Jaha wo ladki apni drink pee rahi thi wahi Veer orange juice pee raha tha. Ab usse khud ko sharm aa rahi thi.

'Ek na ek din mein bhi beer peene lagunga. Hmph! Usme itni badi baat nahi hai kuch...'

Ladki : Toh?

Veer : Hmm?

Ladki : Can I ask you something?

Veer : Hmm! Sure!

Ladki (Veer ko dekhte hue) : What do you think of life?

Veer : Life?

Ladki : Hmmmm!

Ye sawaal sunte hi Veer ko apne ateet ki yaad aa gayi. Wo lamhe...

Jisme usne dard saha, usse prataadit kiya gaya, usse fassaaya gaya, uska apmaan kiya gaya, na koi pyaar aur na hi koi pyaar karne waala.

Kese usse ghar se baahar nikaala gaya, kese dar badar wo bhatakta raha, wo accident...

Sab kuch ek pal me jese flashback ki tarah uske mann me aaya aur fir agle hi pal gaayab ho gaya.

Usne muskuraate hue apne bagal me uss ladki ko dekha jo uske uttar ka wait kar rahi thi aur fir wo bola,

"Life is merciless. Zindagi ko gam dena bakhubi aata hai. Jitna iss zindagi se dosti karna chaahoge na, ye utna hi dur bhaagti hai. Kuch logo ke paas kaabiliyat hoti hai toh wo apni zindagi badal lete hai. Kuch ke paas kaabiliyat hoti hai par halaat unhe apni zindagi na badalne par majboor kar dete hai. Aur jinke paas kaabiliyat nahi hoti wo bas kismat ke liye baithe rehte hai. Ki kisi na kisi din unki kismat chamkegi."

Wo ladki bade hi gaur se Veer ki baatein sunn rahi thi.

"Ek samay aisa bhi aata hai, jab aapke paas sab kuch hota hai, par jeene ki tamanna hi nahi rehti. Aisa lagta hai maano ki bas ye zindagi apne aap hi tham jaaye. Khud ko maarne ki himmat bhi nahi hoti kabhi. Bas talaash rehti hai toh kuch aisi cheez ki jo sab kuch badal ke rakh de. Aur pata... Baad me wo milta bhi hai. Wo kisi bhi roop me mil sakta hai, ek insaan ke roop me, ya ek jaanvar, ya fir kuch aur... Jo aapko ek raah dikhaata hai, khushiyaa deta hai, ek naya jeevan deta hai. Bas uska intezaar karna padta hai. Aur jab uss se mulaqaat hoti hai, tab pata chalta hai ki Life kya cheez hai."

Veer ne muskuraate hue apne khayalaat rakhe. Uske bol dil se nikle the. Wo bataate bataate kho gaya tha aur bhool gaya tha ki wo khud apna ateet vyakt kar raha tha iss waqt.

Aur indirectly wo Pari ki baat kar raha tha. Kyuki wahi toh aayi thi uske jeevan me ek farishta bann ke. Bhale hi insaan nahi thi par akhir kuch toh thi. Jo uska saath dene taiyaar thi.

[ :blush2: Idiot! Who told you to get so emotional?]

Pari ki baat sunn Veer kuch na bola bas muskuraata raha.

Jab usne waapas se uss ladki ki orr dekha toh dang reh gaya. Uss ladki ka muh halka khula hua tha aur wo stabdh sii bas Veer ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi. Pehli baar Veer ne finally uske chehre par koi bhaav dekhe. Achambhav aur hairaani saaf nazar aa rahi thi uske chehre par.

Usne kuch bolna chaaha par shabd nahi nikle unn gulaabi hontho se. Aur wo honth waapas se band ho gaye.

Usne Veer se nazre hataayi aur apne glass jo ki aadha khaali ho chuka tha uss par gaur kiya. Fir ek badi hi dheemi sii awaaz me wo boli,

"Intezaar...... Huh!???"

Veer : Hmm?

Ladki : So... You mean... Yadi uss shaks ka intezaar karo toh wo milega...! Right!?

Veer : Huh? Yeah! Zaroor! Samay aane par...

Ladki : I see!!!

Aur bina kuch dobaara kahe... Wo drink pe drink leti gayi. Veer usse dekh ke dang reh gaya. Na jaane kitna alcohol consume kar chuki thi woh. Aur uski haalat dekh Veer ko ab thoda taras aa raha the uss par.

Veer : Hey!! Are you okay??

Ladki : Yesss!! *Hic* I am...

'Fuck! Ye toh tannn ho gayi!'

Ladki : Heyyy! Come with me...

Usne aage badh ke Veer ki collar pakdi aur usse kheechte hue wo kahi le jaane lagi.

Veer : Heyyyy! Wait! Ruko... Arre....

Par uski baato ko ansuna kar wo bas aage badhti rahi jab unn dono ke kaano me ek awaaz padi,

"Kaha jaa rahi ho chammak chhallo? Idhar toh dekho zara..."

Saamne ki orr dekha toh 2 aadmi unke saamne khade hue the. Boht sharaab pee rakhi thi unn dono hi ne. Shaqal se hi badtameez dikh rahe the.

"Aisa maal toh aaj tak nahi dekha behanchod!!"

Unme se ek ne bola. Toh dusra bhi shaamil ho gaya,

"Sahi kaha. Ayyye ladke! Tum jao aur jaake baahar khelo, yaha hum mardo ka kaam hai bas hahaha~ Aur aisa tanch maal toh keval hum hi sambhal sakte hai."

Kehte hue usne ek seeti maari.

Unn dono ke bol sunte hi Veer ka paara chadh gaya. Wo kuch kehta ki tabhi wo ladki Veer ke peeche aayi aur uss se kass ke lipat gayi. Apni nasheeli awaaz me usne Veer ke kaano me kaha,

"Beat them! See! They are harassing me..."

'Damn it!!!'

Uss ladki ki narm narm chuchhiya Veer ki peeth par dhassi hui thi. Usse toh khud ko khushkismat maan na chaahiye tha ki wo ladki uss se iss kadar yu lipti thi. Na jaane kitne logo ko ye anubhav praapt hua hoga.

Aur zaahir sii baat thi, wo ye sab nashe me kar rahi thi. Poori talli nahi hui thi woh, par kaafi hadd tak nasha chadh chuka tha usme.

Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer ko kisi stree ke urojo ka ehsaas apni peeth par hua tha. Aur usse ye ehsaas behad hi madhosh kar raha tha. Wo garam garam, narm narm, gol gol stan uski peeth par dabe hue the.

'I think now I understand ki kyu ye saare ladke ladkiya ye sab kar rahe hai. Aahh! It feels good!'

[Master! Ye maza baad me lena. Filhaal inn dono ko raaste se hatao.]

Pari kii baat sunn Veer ne haami bhari par tabhi wo aadmi ne aage badh Veer ki chhaathi par lipte uss ladki ke haath ko thaam liya.

Ladki : Look! They even dared to touch me. No man... No man has ever touched me without my permission... Kill them... Kill them now...

Ladki ki baatein sunn Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye. Ye kya bol rahi hai ye? Kill them?

'Shit! Kaha phass gaya mein Pari?'

Uss ladki ki garam garam saasein Veer ko sataaye jaa rahi thi.

Aur Veer se bhi raha na gaya. Usne uss aadmi ka haath thaama aur zorr se usse dhakka diya toh wo peeche ki orr dhadaam se jaa gira.

Dusre ne ye dekhte hi gusse me apna haath uthaaya par uss se pehle hi Veer ne uski kanpati pe ek jhaapad raseed diya aur bas...

Sunnnnnn ki awaaz uss aadmi ke kaan me gunjne lagi.

"Hahahahaha ~ Die you fucker..."

Ladki hasste hue Veer ke haath ko thaam lii.

Mauka dekhte hi Veer uss ladki ko bhaga kar stairs leke upar aaya.

Par upar aate hi usse alag hi drashya dekhne ko mila. Agal bagal bas rooms hi rooms the. Aur kuch rooms ke andar se badi hi tezz tezz siskiyo ki awaaz aa rahi thi.

[Yahi hai mauka! Maar do chauka!]

Ladki : Heyyyy! Let's go there...

Aur wo ladki kheechte hue usse wahi ek counter ke paas le gayi,

Ladki : I want a room!

Aadmi : Jii!

Aur pal bhar me hi Veer uss ladki ke saath room me tha.

Usne Veer ko yu dhakka deke litaaya aur uske upar aake baith gayi,

Ladki : Don't you want me??
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Update - 9 ~ First Time

Ab tak...

Ladki : Heyyyy! Let's go there...

Aur wo ladki kheechte hue usse wahi ek counter ke paas le gayi,

Ladki : I want a room!

Aadmi : Jii!

Aur pal bhar me hi Veer uss ladki ke saath room me tha.

Usne Veer ko yu dhakka deke litaaya aur uske upar aake baith gayi,

Ladki : Don't you want me??

Ab aage...

Jab Veer shaam ko Nidhi ke ghar se nikla tha, uske kuch shan baad hi Nidhi ghar aa chuki thi. Wo kaafi thaki hui thi aur thake bhi kyu na? College ki bhaga daudi hi aisi rehti hai ki students kya teachers khud thak jaate hai.

Jab wo lauti toh usse Shreya dwaara pata chala ki Veer kahi gaya hua hai aur wo bata ke bhi nahi gaya ki kaha gaya hai. Bas! Issi baat pe Nidhi bechain ho uthi.

"Arre! Shreya! Tune usse roka kyu nahi? Arre puchna toh chaahiye tha at least. Uska koi friend nahi hai Shreya."

Wo bauhe sikodte hue boli. Uska aisa ravaiyya dekh Shreya bhi hairaan reh gayi. Ye akhir uski behan ko achaanak kya ho gaya? Kyu Veer ke liye wo itna tension le rahi hai?

Shreya : Arre but... Ab usne bola ki usse kuch kaam hai aur jaana hai toh mene zyaada nahi pucha. Ho sakta hai apne ghar gaya ho?

Nidhi : Nahiiiiii!!! Wo apne ghar nahi jaega. Tumhe pata hai na uske gharwalo ne usse ghar se nikaal diya hai. Toh fir kyu jaega wo ghar? Aur aisa kya kaam aa gaya usko ekdum se? Shaam ke 7:30 ho rahe hai Shreya aur abhi tak uska kuch pata nahi hai.

Shreya : Chill Dii! Aap itna kyu tensed ho rahi ho? Gaya hoga kahi. Aa jaega.

Nidhi : Arre uska phone bhi bigda hua hai Shreya. Na hi uske paas koi paise hai aur na hi koi phone, kahi bhatak gaya toh? Mere khayaal se wo bhatak hi gaya hai. Na jaane kaha ghum raha hoga abhi...

Shreya : Shit! Mujhe laga uske paas phone aur paise honge...

Nidhi : Kaha se honge? Kal se wo hamaare saath hai. Mujhe usse kuch paise de dene chaahiye the, emergency ke liye.

Uski baat sunn Shreya usse ghur ke dekhne lagi toh Nidhi ne sawaaliya nazro se uss se pucha,
"Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?"

Shreya : Dekh rahi hu ki aap kuch zyaada hi parvaah kar rahi ho uski. Yaha tak ki aap apni life ki problems tak ko neglect kar rahi ho...

Nidhi : I'm... I'm not neglecting my problems Shreya. Mujhe pata hai mein kya kar rahi hu. And rahi baat Veer ki toh... I know how it feels... Bas isliye mein uski madad kar rahi hu. Nothing else. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jesa tum soch rahi ho.

Shreya : Well! If you say so...

Nidhi : Mein gaadi leke dekh ke aati hu usse. Ho sakta hai aas paas hi ho.

Shreya : No way Dii! Aap yahi rahiye, thak gayi ho aap, Juhi ke saath rahiye... Mein jaati hu dekhne.

Aur Shreya Nidhi ki scooty liye Veer ko dhundne nikal padi. Ek taraf jaha Nidhi ke mann me bechaini thi toh wahi dusri taraf Shreya ke mann me keval gaaliya hi nikal rahi thi Veer ke liye.

'Shit! Pata nahi kaha nikal gaya ye bhi bina bataaye. Iske kaaran mujhe ghum ghum ke dhundna pad raha hai. Koi baccha bhi gumta hai toh jaldi mil jaata hai par ye janaab toh... Ye dii bhi boht bholi hai. Aane do usko... Aisa maza chakhaungi na...'

Aur wo yahi sochte sochte aas paas ki galiyon me chakkar lagaane lagi. Par Veer ka koi ata pata na laga.

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Idhar Veer uss kamre me bed pe pasra hua tha aur uske upar wahi ladki baithi hui thi.

Veer uski sundarta itne paas se dekh ke hi mantramugdh ho gaya. Kya hi sundarta thi. Wo haseen chehra, poori uttamta se taraasha gaya wo badan, wo nain naksh jo ek jhalak me kisi ki jaan lele.

Aisi sundar ladki uske upar baithi hui thi. Par ye baat bhi sach thi ki wo iss waqt poore hosh me nahi thi apne. Yadi wo hosh me hoti toh kya wo ladki uske saath aisa vyavhaar karti? Shayad nahi!?

'I think I don't deserve her. She's too beautiful.'

[What the hell? Apni ahamiyat mat bhulo master. You have me inside your body. I mean... Ahem! Mein aapke andar hu. Aapki value ab pehle jese nahi rahi.]

'Really? Damn! But ye hosh me nahi hai. I don't want to take advantage of her.'

'Check'

Veer ne usse check karna hi behtar samjha. Par jese hi usne uss ladki ko check kiya. Saamne window me result dekh usse ek zorrdaar jhatka laga. Hairaani ke maare uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Uss ladki ke sar par window khuli toh usme likha tha ~

[System is unable to access this person's identity.]

'What the hell Pari? Mujhe iska status kyu nahi dikh raha?'

[Ahem! Mein apne shabd waapas leti hu. This girl is more than I expected.]

'What do you mean Pari? Mein usse check kyu nahi kar paa raha?'

[Aisa ek hi kaaran se hota hai master.]

'Aur kya hai wo?'

[Wo ye hai ki mera level low hai. Aur ye ladki ka status lagta hai boht high hai. Jab kisi ka pad aur status boht high hota hai aur mera level low toh uss maamle me aap unn logo ki jaankari nahi dekh paoge master. Aur ye ladki kisi boht bade gharaane se lagti hai. Aapki toh lottery lag gayi!]

'Lottery lag gayi? Fuck! Meri gaand marne waali hai. Didn't you see those two bodyguards? Yadi galti se bhi isne bata diya toh mujhe zinda nahi chorrenge wo log. I'm leaving! I cannot do it with her.'

[Nahi! Master! Ye kya keh rahe ho. Aapke paas time kam hai. Aur aisi ladki aapko fir kabhi nahi milegi. Aap usse force nahi kar rahe. See! Wo khud aapke upar baithi hui hai.]

'Pari! You don't understand...'

[System is going in sleep mode. Enjoy your first time master.]

'What the hell?? Pari!? Hey!!! Fucccckkkkk!!'

Veer ko uske haal chorr Pari toh sleep mode me jaa chuki thi. Ab sab kuch Veer ke upar tha ki wo kya karne waala tha.

Tabhi wo ladki neeche jhuki aur Veer ke chehre ke paas apna chehra laayi. Uski garam garam saasein Veer ke chehre par pad rahi thi jo usse kuch galat karne par majboor karti jaa rahi thi.

Usne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal par apna ek angutha firaaya aur uske chehre ko nihaarne lagi,
"You know? No one... No one has ever touched me. You are the first one."

Veer : Huh??

Ladki : Never ever I have kissed anyone.




Veer (blush) : .......

Aur agle hi pal usne jhukte hue Veer ke honth apne gulaabi hontho me bhar liye.

Dono ke honth aapas me milte hi ek zordarr jhatka dono ke hi shareer ko laga. Ye dono ki hi pehli kiss thi.

Veer ko jaha ladkiya dekh ke ignore kar diya karti thi, aaj Veer ko aisi ladki apne neeche litaaye uske honth choom rahi thi.

Ye kisi sapne se kam nahi tha uske liye. Ye adhbhut ehsaas Veer kabhi nahi bhul paega.

Shayad ab usse samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu wo ladke ladkiya neeche aise ek dusre ko choom rahe the. Ye anubhav tha hi aisa ki kisi ko bhi iski latt lag jaaye.

Veer ne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chume. Wo nahi chaahta tha ki wo kabhi bhi iss feeling ko bhule. Kya pata usse aisi ladki dubaara mile bhi ya nahi?

Aaj Veer khud ko boht hi lucky maan raha tha jo aisi khubsoorti ki bala uss se chipak ke uske saath chumban kar rahi thi.

Aur isliye usne jee bhar ke uss ladki ke honth chuse. Jab dono ke honth ek dusre se alag hua toh dono ki saasein ek dum tezz thi. Ladki poori tarah se ab nashe me lag rahi thi.

Usne Veer ka haath pakda aur usse raasta dikhaate hue wo apne stano par le aayi.

"Touch me...!!"

Usne badi hi kaamuk awaaz me bola.

Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer kisi ladki ke doodh ko apne haatho me feel kar raha tha. Aur ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ladkiyo ke doodh ab uski pasandeeda cheez bann chuke the.

Bina samay gawaaye aur bina hichkichaate hue Veer ne uss ladki ke stano ko dress ke upar se hi zorr se bheenchte hue unhe nichodna shuru kar diya.

"Aahhhhnnn... Mmmmmmmm"

Aur wo ladki lambi lambi siskiyaa lene lagi.

Veer ne usse pakadte hue apne upar se hata ke usse litaaya aur uske upar chadh gaya. Usse sharam bhi boht aa rahi thi kyuki ye sab wo pehli baar kar raha tha aur wo bhi itni sundar ladki ke saath.

Par saath hi saath usse josh bhi utna hi chadha hua tha. Ladka tha aakhir. Javaani me kadam rakh chuka tha aur ab uske andar ke jangli bhediye ko sambhaalne ke liye ek ladki chaahiye thi jo ki theek uske saamne thi.

Neeche sar jhukaate hue usne uss ladki ki gore nange kandho ko chumna shuru kar diya aur dheere dheere upar jaate hue wo uski gardan ko apni chummiyo se geela karne laga.

"Aaaaahhhnnnn!"

Usse pata tha ki ye sahi nahi hai. Kyuki wo ladki nashe me thi par wo zabardasti bhi nahi kar raha tha ek prakaar se. Wo ladki khud usse yaha lekar aayi thi.

'Sorry! But I have to do it.'

Usne mann me hi apne aap se maafi maangi kyuki wo ab iss ladki ke saath sambhog karne jaa raha tha.

Apne haatho ka istemaal karte hue pal bhar me hi Veer ne uss ladki ki wo kaali dress uske badan se alag kar dii. Aur ab uske saamne wo ladki keval ek black panty me thi.

Bra toh usne pehni hi nahi thi jis kaaran uski gori narm chuchhiyo ke darshan Veer ko ho gaye.

Apne gale me thook ka niwaala nigalte hue wo aage badha aur unn narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke pehle dekha uske baad unhe dheere se magar pyaar se chhua aur fir agle hi pal usne apna muh khol ek chuchha muh me bhar liya.

"Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!"

Ladki siski lete hue apne haatho ko Veer ke sar ke peeche lapet lii aur uske baalo me apni ungliya ferr usse apni orr kheechte hue apne stano par uska sar rakh dabaav badhaane lagi.

Jese kehna chaah rahi ho ki chuso inhe. Jee bhar ke chuso.

Aur Veer ne bhi jese uske mann ki baat sunn lii thi. Usne theek wahi kiya. Ye adhbhut ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega. Unn narm narm chuchhiyo ko usne jee bhar ke chusa, unhe nichoda, dabaaya aur nipples ke saath khela.

Kabhi wo unhe kaat'ta toh kabhi unpe jeebh firaata, kabhi muh me bharta toh kabhi daato tale daba ke usse kheechta.

Aur harr prahaar par ladki sihar ke reh jaati. Wo Veer ki gardan aise chus rahi thi maano jese khaa hi jaegi.

Pal bhar me dekhte dekhte hi dono hi nagn ho chuke the. Jab Veer ne uss ladki ki yoni ke darshan kiye toh shan bahr ke liye toh wo stabdh bas dekhta hi raha. Kya adhbhut drashya tha.

Wo chikni patli si gori choot usse uskaa rahi thi. Keh rahi thi ki aao aur chuso isse. Tabaah kar do isse.

Itni patli gulaabi choot usse har pal madhosh karti jaa rahi thi.

Veer ne porn dekhi thi, par asli me wo ek ladki ko yu nagn pehli baar dekh raha tha.

Ladki bhi usse itni nasheeli aankho se dekh rahi thi jo Veer ko bekaabu kar raha tha.



Paseene ke maare uss ladki ke baal bhi bheeg chuke the.

Veer apna chehra uss choot ke paas le gaya aur pehle usne ek baar zorr se uss madak khusboo ko sungha aur fir apna muh khol uss choot ko apne muh me bhar liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa..."

Uss ladki ki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi aur usne apni taangein zorr se Veer ke sar par ird gird kass lii.

Aisa ehsaas usse aaj tak nahi hua tha. Wo toh jese alag hi duniya me jaa chuki thi.

Kuch hi minute ki chusaayi ke baad uski choot rass chorrne lagi aur skhalit hote hue wo ladki jhatke pe jhatke lene lagi.

'This is the time...'

Veer ne sochte hue apna lund uski choot rass se bhigoya aur uski choot ke dwaar par dastak dete huye wo apna lund malne laga. Uska lund taiyaar tha andar ki gufa ko khojne ke liye.

Apna ling choot ke dwaar par set karte hue usne ek zorrdaar dhakka maara aur uska topa jhat se choot me pravesh kar gaya.

Dard ke maare bechaari ladki iske pehle ki zorr se chillaa paati, Veer ne uske muh par haath rakh uski awaaz ko rok diya.

'Shit! Aaarghhhh...'

Halka dard toh usse bhi ho raha tha. Par uss ladki ke dard ke saamne uska dard kuch bhi nahi tha.

Kuch derr baad usne fir do dhakke maare aur Veer ka lund uski choot ki gehraaiyo me jaa chuka tha.

Halke halke aasu uss ladki ki komal palko ko bhigone lage the. Veer ko ab waqai bura lag raha tha. Wo toh iss ladki ka naam tak nahi jaanta tha. Kaha se aayi hai, kis ghar se hai, kya naam hai, kya kaam karti hai, Veer kuch bhi nahi jaanta tha.

Usse bas itna pata tha ki yadi usne abhi ye kaam nahi kiya toh wo Pari ko kho dega aur wo aisa bilkul bhi nahi chaahta tha. Pari inn kuch dino me uski zindagi ka aham hissa banti jaa rahi thi.

Kuch derr yu hi bina hile dule wo apna lund uski yoni ke andar hi rakha raha. Aur jab ladki shaant hui toh Veer ne haule haule hi apne ling ko aage peeche karna shuru kar diya.

"Aahhnnnn...mmmmmm"

"Shit!!!!! Damnnnnn..."

Choot andar se itni garm thi ki aisa lag raha tha maano Veer ka lund ussi waqt andar hi pighal jaega.

Kisi bhatti se kam nahi thi wo. Ye alaukik aur anootha ehsaas wo kabhi nahi bhul paega.

Choot itni tight thi ki uska lund badi hi mushqil se andar baahar ho raha tha.

Chut ke andar ki twacha ki deeware uske lund ko kass ke jakde hue thi aur apne taapmaan se uske lund ko kisi garam lohe ki rod me parivartit kar rahi thi.

*Thap* *Thap*

Ki awaaz kamre me fel gayi aur iss adbhut chudaayi ke baad Veer ab skhalit hone ke nazdeek tha.

'Mein andar nahi gira sakta. Kahi ye pregnant ho gayi toh dikkat ho jaegi. Shit! But I want to cum in her so bad... Noooo! Baahar Veer... Baahar!!'

Aur agle hi pal usne apna lund baahar nikaal apne veerya ki ek tezz pichkaari chorri, jo seedha uss ladki ki nangi chuchhiyo, uski chhaati, aur uske pait par jaake giri.

Apni aankhein band kar Veer iss pal ko apne dil-o-dimaag me utaarne laga. Taaki ye pal usse hamesha yaad rahe.

Jab kuch seconds baad usne neeche dekha toh ek jhatka aur laga usse.

Neeche bedsheet par aur uske lund par khoon laga hua tha. Yaha tak ki ladki ki yoni me bhi khoon laga hua tha.

'Fuck!!! Ye bhi virgin thi????? Gaya... Mein gaya ab! They will kill me.... Pariii?? Are you there?'

Par Pari ka koi jawaab na aaya.

'Shiiitttt!!!'

Usne uthte hue uss ladki ko yuhi nagn apni baaho me leke uthaaya aur forun hi bathroom me le gaya.

Ladki behosh ho chuki thi. Veer ne fatafat uski choot aur apne lund ko acche se saaf kiya. Ladki ke shareer par laga veerya bhi usne saaf kiya.

Aur usse baahar laake dubaara bistar par lita diya.

Usne khud ke kapde pehne aur sabse pehle usne bedsheet ka wo tukda faada jaha khoon laga hua tha aur uss kapde ko apne jeb me rakh liya.

Abhi wo uss ladki ko kapde pehna hi raha tha ki tabhi...

*Bang*

Ek tezz awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur usse kuch shor bhi sunaayi dene laga.

Ye awaaz neeche se aa rahi thi.

Par Veer ke shareer ke ruye iss waqt khade hue the. Kyuki wo jaanta tha...

Ki jo awaaz usne suni...

Wo kisi aur cheez ki nahi balki...

Ek gunshot ki thi...

Iss maamle me wo kabhi galat nahi ho sakta tha. Usne pehle bhi real life me ye sound suna hua tha aur wo bhali bhaati iss awaaz se parichit tha. Wo awaaz...

Wo galat ho hi nahi sakta tha.

Wo awaaz pakke se ek gunshot ki thi...

Uske baad wo shorgul...

Zaroor neeche kuch hua tha. Aur ye shor zaroor gunshot ke baad machi afra tafri ka tha.

'Ohh! Noooo!!!'

Uske andar ek darr umadna shuru ho chuka tha. Apna thook nigalte hue usne forun hi uss ladki ko kapde pehnaaye aur wo usse dekhne laga. Usse dhyaan aaya ki uske haath me aate waqt ek bag bhi tha.

Veer ne forun hi wo bag khola toh usme bas kuch cash tha aur 2 credit cards. Aur ek choti sii diary jo ki ekdum khaali thi. Saath hi ek pen bhi tha...

Veer ne ek panna faada aur usme apna naam aur mobile number likh uske bag ke andar hi daal diya.

'I know ki jab tum hosh me aaogi tab tum mujhe hate karogi... Shaayad tum mujhe maarna bhi chaaho. Aur mein maanta hu mene tunhaare saath galat kiya hai. Isliye mein apna number chorr raha hu. Baad me tum jo chaahe mere saath karna chaahogi mujhe manzoor rahega...'

Mann me sochte hue wo uss ladki ko uthaake baahar nikalne ke liye taiyaar tha.

'Mujhe ek phone jald hi lena padega.'

Sochte hue usne uss ladki ko apni peeth par utha liya.

Par wo ye nahi jaanta tha ki neeche kya ghatna ghatit hui hai.
 
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